| "The girl from the past" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: darknessngel of hate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 17:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was really good. update soon kk??
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is good so far. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Lya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 18:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
i liked it, keep on writing, i am interested, very! k, well see ya
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Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 15:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
'Ello!! It's me!!! Your story is awesome!!! I like the plot! ^^ I have a suggestion, though. Pick ONE writing style. I mean, you can have paragraph style or the other one, but mixing the two together is confusing. The other style? Well, it's like when you do this: Kouen: hiya! my name is kouen! Inu-yasha: Duh. we know that. Ya know, like that. Anyway, I'll be back (sometime)! ^^
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