| "Shikon No Tama High" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 00:39 CDT
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i love it!!!!!!!!!!! maybe you can but a lemon in it. um......lets see.......rin, sango, and kagome become so close it isn't funny.....um......naraku comes and things turn into a living hell cuz naraku is there princable. kikyou comes back into the picture and tries to take inuyasha back.... well thats all i got so far.....update soon cuz you havent updated in three long years!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: guardiangurl245 On: April 04, 2005 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i think this is amazing!!! im sure you'll come up with some new ideas really soon, but keep writing this one it's amazing !!!
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Title: Mmmmm-yeah!
Reviewed By: *she_devil (not online) On: September 02, 2004 23:17 CDT
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I loved it! I thought it was so kawaii how all the charrie's were teasing and fighting and I liked the Kouga/Kagome bit. That was hilarious! I'm really glad that you included Sesshy in the fic, and the way he acts is believeable to the actual Sesshomaru, I love how you wrote it. Sango and Miroku couldn't be more hilarious. Its sad how he can never seem to woe her and she doesn't let it slip that she likes him, yet they both like each other! You better have some more fluffy between them soon, you're driving me crazy waiting!!! :P Ayame and Kouga are great too! In a lot of fics i've read, they've been to close right away and by Kouga admitting that he still had feelings for Kagome it really flowed. I also love how Kagome can be so punk in this fic and yet still sweet and loving. (by crying, etc...) InuYasha is so awesome! He really does show his soft side by the way he talks and acts and noticeably cares about how Kagome is. Anywayz, luv the fic, PLZZZZZZZZZ continue!!! I can't wait to see the upcoming chappies and I can't wait to see what happens between everyone! **If you need ideas, I'd really be interested in seeing what happens between Naraku and Kikyou and how they come back into the story, and it would be fun to see what the guys would do if some aggressive men tried to flirt with Kagome, Sango, and Ayame. A beach scene would be cool! WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!! ~she_devil~
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 13:23 CDT
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Ok this review is for the whole story...hmmm..ok a bit confusing at some places and good at other places...soo ummm i unno...and my previous review was just and opinion and don't take it as flame..i was kinda grumpy because my brother was watching tv full blast in MY room and it was so ...ok..i don't think you wanna hear my boring story..¬_¬' when will the gang get back? Lke go to their homes..it kinda sound like their at home but at a different place...OoOoOo do the club thing..that's cool/fun/and predictible...or what about going to an amusment park?!?! uhhh pdate soon.
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 13:02 CDT
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(reviewing for chapter 11) WTF?!?!?!? Why the hell would Kagome kill herself because she's not Inuyasha's girlfriend. It's both their fault really. They ASSUMED that they we an item so they were ...not smart. And WTF is up with Ayame? Didn't she say that she and Kouga were just best friends?!?! Then in chapter 11 she's all like I thought I was your woman...man what's up with her?!?! She's the one who said there was nothing going on! And Inuyasha, Kagome only said "oh I'm Inuyasha's girlfriend" ONCE! Why did he spazz?? And if he assumed he and Kagome we a couple and all then why did he put his arm around her at the beach to show that the other guys she was taken...this is pretty confusing...AND why would he just break up with Kagome when she is HURTING!!! WHY WOULD HE?!?! She's freaking killing herself!!! GAWD! And what is Kagome crying or dying for? She isn't with Inuyasha!! He didn't ASK her to be his girlfriend or anything...They're only relationship that i recall is that their really good friends..with kisses and hugs...but no one made it official. Gee...this is not ment to be seen as flaming but as an opinion. Ok i'l get back to reading..[disliking the fact it's Kouga and Kagome for the next few chapters...sorry but i'm a Kagome/Inuyasha fan.] [FYI an OPINION!]
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 23:26 CDT
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great story..hope u update soon so we can see what happens next..see yah..
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 20:42 CDT
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before i read i just want to say KUDOS for having done 15 chapters in one day. Kudos..now i will read your story. Sorry i did this now instead of after i read the chapters...I might have forgotten...oh well sounds interesting...so I'll rad now..
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 13:51 CDT
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Hey...why dont you have any reveiws??? anyways, i have an idea!! if their hotel is next to the ocean, you could have a shark attack one of the girls, and then have her boyfriend save her!!Update soon!!
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