| "The Four Worlds" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Sorry...
Reviewed By: Orlando Bloom Karasu Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 08:57 CST
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Hello readers! I'm sorry but I am dicontinuing this fic. I'm writing other fics and I don't have time for this one... I wrote a lot since the part I left off at in chapter two and well... It got delited off of my computer. So I don't feel like writing it all over again. Mabey some day I'll continue it... Orlando Bloom ROCKS!!!!! From the author ~Orlando Bloom Karasu Lover~
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Reviewed By: Orlando Bloom Karasu Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 21:34 CDT
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I guess you like Orlando Bloom Lady Amalthea Irrylath you have good taste ^_^ Isn't he the best actor? Orlando Bloom........... L_O_V_E!
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Reviewed By: Orlando Bloom Karasu Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 13:39 CDT
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Sorry I had to stop at that part I know it was a bad place to end the chapter...^_^
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Reviewed By: newhippie60 On: July 31, 2004 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU KNOW WHO.Please try to finish the story.Also try to put more Mimi and Sora in it.I also gave your sister a Yu-Gi-Oh card called Kurama.
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 19:13 CDT
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Yep! Season one is the best and the one that started them all! Good story line you got going, though this does seem like a lousy place to stop at.
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Reviewed By: Lady Amalthea Irrylath (I'm not logged in right now either!) On: July 19, 2004 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful! season one is the best! also, I love your screen name!
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY (back from a long absence and STILL not logged in) On: July 16, 2004 01:46 CDT
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I KNEW IT! Update soon. I see much potential in this story.
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Reviewed By: Orlando Bloom Karasu Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 10:40 CDT
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I'm really sorry if you got the wrong message... I am only planing to let Jin, Kurama, and Yusuke go to the Digital World. But I'm glad that you like my fic and I will update VERY soon. Sorry again. ~Orlando Bloom Karasu Lover
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY (not logged in) On: July 13, 2004 23:43 CDT
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Hm...interesting. Just one question. (Points to bottom review) Would it be alright if I joined in the hunt for Hiei? I've been itching for some action lately because I am so bored that I can't even update one chapter that I have been working on (not really) for weeks. Just a little side note: Are you taking anyone at all? Age: 15 (not almost, close to it); Looks: Kind of scrawny but not skinny, rib cage is barely visible, wears a comfortable white shirt, roomy bluejeans (or shorts), small afro (my skin color is WHITE); Weapons: Punches and kicks; Special abilites: Super speed, incredible stamina, above-average eye-sight, above-average hearing, can summon seemingly infinite number of lackeys that must obey my every command or perish, and Virtual Video Game creating powers (could come in handy since the Digital World is nothing but one giant program and we may be encountering some classic goons). I'm not sure if you're taking anyone to be in your fic, but, oh well.
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Title: Pick me plz!!
Reviewed By: Kazashima On: July 13, 2004 22:00 CDT
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Name:Raven Kazashima Age:16-- Clothes:Black tank top, black baggy pants w/ chains all over, Black leather boots, Black elbow high gloves w/spikes on the knuckles, black trench coat-- PJ's:Black silk pants w/matching silk tank top-- Swim Suit:Black bikini with dragons on it--- A few typical personality traits:Strong silent type, like hieis personality-- Snacks you're bringing:Sweet snow!!! Anime guy(s)/girl(s) you're dragging along(limit 3):*sigh*Hiei*sigh*,Kurama,My best friend Christine-- Others you're inviting(optional):any one who wants to come-- How OOC they (and you) can get:dont really care so long as i dont do anything stupid-- Pranks you're gonna pull:any really good ones u can think of-- Games you want to play:7 minutes in heaven(Hiei!!!), Truth or dare(i always do dares), Spin the bottle(Hiei!!), Food fight!!!! Please pick me!!
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