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| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: kitsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 15:26 CDT
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Great story so far!! Plz update soon!! Here's the info... Name: Ryuna Age:19 Hair:butt-length midnight black hair with 4inch silver tips, natural.Black fox ears w/ silver tips on top of head. Eyes: Violet/silver with feral slit silver pupils. Height: slightly shorter than miroku. Clothes: Black battle kimono with slits up to mid-thigh with a Silver fox wrapped around waist with head resting on chest. Type of demon: Half black fox/half silver dragon Personality:Loves to prank, mischevious, had a bad past, caring, loyal, posessive, protective, loving. Paired with: Miroku P.s.: can i have a bigger form? like the size of Sesshomarus true form but a pitch black fox with silver dragon wings? And can i have 3 tails with silver tips in both forms and black wings in normal form?
| Reviewed By: Mika 34 On: October 30, 2005 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur story so far!! can i please be in ur story!!! name - Mika age - 15 hair - long black straight w/ purple highlights clothes - black kimono w/ red sakura blossoms demon - full dog demon personality- stubbourn, headstrong, brave, perstistent, caring, hyper, loving, and does anything 4 friends...PLEASE PUT ME IN UR STORY!!!! I LOVE IT!!!
| Reviewed By: Inu_and_Nazuna_4_eva [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 09:02 CST
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hey,i like your story! name:*our real name?* Lindsay age:15 hair color/style:black/very long/strait clothes:anything type of demon:FOX ALL THE WAY! personalaty:gental,caring,rough when need be,sarcastic,VERY air headed,hyper......i think thats all i wanna be in your story,PLEEEEASE!
| Reviewed By: InuyashaFreak-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, the style of writing is ok. the o/c is also good. i liked it, but i have read stuff like it before. great job though!
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