Title: hey there!
Reviewed By: Crazy Spark [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, Sesiani! This story is really good, but it doen't really make sense without the prologe. For instance, how are poeple supposed to know who Kikyani is? Anyway, it'd make more sense if you put it in there. I'm gonna post a couple of my stories soon, so reveiw? See Ya! Robin (AKA. Crazy Spark)
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