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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Inuyasha luvr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY I THOUGHT IT WAS GOOD WHY DIDN'T U FINISH IT??
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Inuyasha luvr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 21:47 CST
Comment/Review:
i thought it was good why didn't u finish it??
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Reviewed By: inuyashapup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 15:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!! its very nice!!!! kagome is alot like me in this!! i am a tomboy :( i know its sad *for the people who say i am a tomboy that is* i kick them to hell and back you probale don't want to listen to me *no one dose*sigh* anyway here is what i want to say 1.longer chapters 2.more inuyasha 3.update those are all i want to point out remember them live them love them and be them k!! I am werrid i know!!
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Reviewed By: Jazelda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story dude, but could you put "these" around when peoples are talking? I dont wanna nitpick or anything but it makes it easier to read. and i love kagomes attitude! it reminds of my best friend in the entire cosmos Racheal lol
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Reviewed By: crescentmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it the ratings are based on the chapter lenght but i geuss ifyou update often it doesn't matter. keep going.lol.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Its really good .. the chapters are a little short but other than that i like it !! update soon !!
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Reviewed By: Peku On: July 14, 2004 21:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
its good so far i just think that your chapters are too short maybe you can put two chapters in one or sumthin like that.
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