| "A new Era" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Oni Goohst On: August 03, 2004 15:34 CDT
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W...wow. Shigure is...man. Haha. Well, I'm off to read the next chapter. Keep up the writing!
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Title: ...cliff...hanger...
Reviewed By: OniGoohst On: July 24, 2004 13:54 CDT
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You're doing great with the story! I'm liking it alot. I can't get onto the first sentence without smiling, heh.
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 08:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: OniGoohst On: July 16, 2004 15:19 CDT
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This is sock-rocking...and yet, still, with the cliffhangerdness! Aaagh! What the heck! .> This was really good! ::throws a stack of paper and pencils in front of you for your disposal:: Write.
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 15:14 CDT
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Chapter 3 rocks!!!!! Please continue!!!!
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Title: Review...?
Reviewed By: Oni Goohst On: July 15, 2004 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm...according to the term, "fan fic," I am guessing that this was inspired from FB. Because of that, I gave it a 9 for originality/creativity (still good, but what do I know?) and I saw a couple of grammatical errors, so I could not neglect them, and still gave you a 9 for it. If you can guess, I rate on a degrading fashion, meaning seeing bad things is what brings the score down, not seeing good things bringing the score up...so that should say alot for your story. Personally... IT WAS GREAT!!! Hehe. What i hated was, the fact that there was not more for me to read...(hates having to wait) dammit, girl. Get to writing this fantastic story!
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 08:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Damn! This story rocks! Please continue!!!
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