| "Cold Night Air" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Silver Frost [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 00:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello ^_^ I Usually give wierd reviews but I'll try to give something that is not wierd ( I said TRY okay?) Hmmm I think I saw a movie involving vampires and werewolves...let see...oh yeah, one is the Underworld and the the other one is Van Helsing. But your story has the closest ressemblance to the Underworld movie right? Have you seen that movie? Don't look at me like THAT! ( Sees Authoress glaring and about to hit me with anything she can throw) Hehehehe don't get me wrong I like it, though it's a change of genre and all but hey,it's nice! I'll be looking forward for the next chapters hmmm So that means Bakura can't go outside during the morning because he'll fry right? or only when he is Trast? Because Vamps hates sunlight right? or AAAAAH I'll just read on to find out. Hehehehe it's a good thing those rotten Ninja Fighting Fishes aren't here..( Looks over my shoulder) WHAT THE---? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT HERE! NINJA FIGHTING FISHES!( Runs away like a werewolf ^_^) * I tried to give a normal review but those pesky FISHES!
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Title: UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: Master_Of_Red_Eyes On: July 22, 2004 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You haven't shown us Rayne yet! This is a really good story, you could make Rayne try to attack Joey or something... No offense Joeyfans!
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooo this is really good but chapter 7 & 8 are the same chapter!!! anyway, update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: a reviewer On: July 15, 2004 23:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your story. Is the guy Bakura? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: wing angel On: July 15, 2004 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice story
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