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| "Beneath Thy Feather Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Linwe On: August 06, 2004 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you managed to update!!! For some reason, my computer won't allow me to review on ff.net, so I'll leave my reviews here. Anyway, I'm little confused on something - you had earlier (both in previous chapters and earlier in this chapter) that Kaoru didn't like Loki at all; nearly hated him, I think. So why are she and Loki suddenly friends? I'm a bit confused where that came from. Other than that, I can hardly wait for the next chapter! It should be very interesting!! ~Linwe
| Title: love your story
Reviewed By: Linwe On: July 24, 2004 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I was following your story originally on ff.net, but I'm glad to see it here too! I hope you can continue soon, this is a very interesting beginning. I'm anxious to see what's going to happen between the characters later on. ~linwe
| Reviewed By: Bookkbaby84 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 11:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, come on! Please update! If it's possible, could you update before 7/29/04? I leave for camp the day after that, and then I won't be back for three weeks! I want to know what happens next! Excellent fanfic so far! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Bookkbaby84 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! Awesome fic so far- I can't wait to read more. I haeb't read anything so far that has incorperated mythology with Rurouni Kenshin so well. Please update soon! Love the fic!
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