Reviewed By: Guttagutta On: July 17, 2004 05:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Way too much of "lalala". You write pretty nicely, but your character comes dangerously close to a MarySue with her angsty past, end and perfect singing voice and so on. Also, for a Saiyuki fic, this doesn't really seem to have anything to do with Saiyuki. Seems more like self-promotion. Also, it's pretty unbelievable that Sanzo-ikkou would be the least bit interested in the singer ( well, maybe Gojyo on horizontal level ). Specially Sanzo.
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