| "Impossible Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Chelsea503 On: October 06, 2006 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did you stop writing?! That's an amazing story, you can't just leave it like that. Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: Chelsea503 On: October 05, 2006 14:23 CDT
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Me, again. I read chapter two just now. I like where it's going but I'm seeing alot of phrases that you use in your other stories which makes this one or possible the other one seem unoriginal.
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Title: Impossible Dreams
Reviewed By: Chelsea503 On: October 05, 2006 14:10 CDT
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This is really interesting. I love the way you write. I'm only on chapter one, but I've read some of your other stories (Soul Therapy, Confessions of a Broken Heart, Perfectly Flawed)and they were amazing. But I really want to see a romance spark between InuYasha and Kagome, and maybe Sango and Miroku. I haven't finished the whole thing so I don't know whats going to happpen. Sorry if I'm rambling. Great story!
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Reviewed By: inuluvr02 On: September 18, 2006 21:02 CDT
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This is so good! I have never heard of a slave fic before, but this is really amazing. I never would have thought of all these details and plots. I love it and cannot wait for more. Please consider updating!
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Title: AWESOME!!!!
Reviewed By: Angel_4_life (not logged in) On: May 04, 2005 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o my god this is such a great story please please please update soon i luuuuuuuuuuuv slave fics i have read two already (on another site) and they were really good but this one just takes the cake! Your stories are all amazing you have talent did you know that? MAJOR TALENT!!! UPDATE SOON I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lesa On: April 20, 2005 17:22 CDT
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This story is awesome, but I hope you update soon, i can't wait to see if they reunite or if a romance started between Kagome and Inuyasha...please do, update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 21:46 CST
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I love it!!!! I am a sucker for slave fics, I am the proud writer of one myself. If only I wasn't the world's worst updater. Anyway, awesome story so far!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou (not signed in) On: February 25, 2005 18:56 CST
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okay... that was wonderful! please, you have to update soon, this long division from this story is driving me insane and i can't take the pain of being separated. please, please tell me that you will be updating soon... and that the inutaisho brothers will be reconciled... :D me likes the sesshy-chan!
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 19:11 CDT
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i know it's been a while since you updated and i left you a review, i just wanted to let you know that i am in love with this story and that i can't wait for the story to continue. i have a question for you, where did naraku get the jewel from? how did he get ahold of it to fracture it and put it on all the youkai? and what happened to sesshoumaru!? i need to see him in this story! ja ne! ~hanyou-elf
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 18:22 CDT
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okay, this is one of my favorite stories that you've written! but i need more from it! i know there are more chapters, i think i've read up through chapter 15, you know? and i need the rest! i like to reread fics when i am stumped and forced to hunt my muse down, but i can't do that when i know there is so much more to this story. if you don't want to post the rest of them here, would it be too much to ask for you to email me the chapters at elf_hanyou@yahoo .com? i would really really appreciate it and i would love you forever! (please!) ja! ~hanyou-elf
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Reviewed By: Twilight Myst [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I love how you're doing it! Update soon! ^_^
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Title: Great Chapter!
Reviewed By: Katana14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was unexpecting, but a better turn in the story. I had expected something of the usual, like Kagome melts Inu's heart, frees the slaves, leads the revolution, they have kids the end, next chapter. But this is a breath of fresh air from having so many authors force the two together so fast. This is definatly much better than those other slave stories. Nice work, can't wait for the next update! Over and Out!
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Title: Great Plot!
Reviewed By: Katana14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this has a great plot! The characters are very developed into the setting, and I love rebellion! I'm a rebel myself, and would rather die than live a life of slavery! Please update! I'll be looking forward to it. Over and Out!
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Title: HIYA!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 13:15 CDT
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I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love everything about it. The plot, the setting, the roles of the characters... UPDATE!!!!! I want to know what happens! I'll be back!
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