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 Title: Hooked
Reviewed By: seacil [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 24, 2007 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ewww. If that woman becomes queen, I'll have to kill her myself. I'm sooo hooked on this story. Even though I only knew the Ranma cast when I decided to read it, it started out very interesting, and the complexity got me even MORE interested. I can't wait for the next chapter. :) sincerely,seacil
 Title: My title? Sir.
Reviewed By: Master Roy  On: April 21, 2006 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is...new. A Ranma1/2 fic that doesn't needlessly bash Akane. On a side note... "Tenchi couldn't believe what he was hearing, "Where did you come up with that ridiculous idea that girls can't be just as strong as guys?" Erm...this is a proven scientific fact(observation if you want to get technical; and yes, even the female scientists have acknowledged this...fact). Females of most known species tend to have less muscle mass than males. There are a few, though, like the black widow spider(And spiders aren't closely related to Humans...or Juraians for that matter...) But the Female's bulky body in that species is because of the whole egg thing... And they eat their mates after copulation. That is, to my knowledge, the most pointless thing I've ever learned. Oi...
 Reviewed By: yuru09  On: March 12, 2006 19:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Awesome fic. I wasn't so big on the whole Ranma/Akane thing but ya got me into it. I'm more of a Akane/Ryouga..hee hee...oh and same with Tenchi/Ryoko...I like Ayeka and I despise Ryoko..Yah...anyway, update soon!
 Title: Cliff Hangers
Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 01, 2005 11:23 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Damn you and your cliff hangers, damn you for making me want to read this over and over again! Damn you for making me want more, plese update soon! ^_^
 Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in)  On: January 31, 2005 09:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooooh....GREAT chappie. That was really cruel of Jin though...he's just getting eviller by the second! And he said it finally! YAYNESS! I'm so happy! I wonder who interrupted them though? Hopefully they won't rat on them...-_-. Newayz, update soon!
 Reviewed By: Jaded_shrew [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2005 06:48 CST
Comment/Review:
kick ass chapter dude, i can't wait for the next one!!
 Reviewed By: DBZ Lover(not in)  On: December 10, 2004 06:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Geez.....Jin's just getting more and more annoying.....I have a good idea about what he's up to, but I don't wanna say nething.....I leave that to u......^^" Anywayz, great chappie, update soon!
 Reviewed By: A reader  On: December 01, 2004 12:56 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think your writing style is very good, it seems to set a mood and evokes good imagry. But I really dislike Akane most of the time, and giving her a powerup is...just asking for trouble. While Ryoga and Sasami might be a cute couple, (although I disagree completely.) what happens when Ryoga's inability to contain his psychopathic rage consistantly happens? How many 'commoners' are going to die because of him? With him being a couple with a princess, his actions are going to affect more than a few people.
 Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 30, 2004 12:57 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I gotta say that I feel sorry for Ryouga and all the other people cursed to transform. It seems to me that the curse actually attracts water to its victims in one shape, form, or fashion. I could tell that Ryouga and Sasami would make for a good couple. Her open mindedness really meshes well with Ryouga's shyness. As for Sora, he just went up a few points on my poll for not taking any of Jin's crap, but it serves him right for trying to mess with Akane. Keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 26, 2004 09:29 CST
Comment/Review:
HA! Serves Sora right! And I wonder what Akane's reaction will be to Ranma? Update soon!
 Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in)  On: November 22, 2004 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Geez, Xian-Pu and Kuno are just gonna make things worse! I don't particularily mind Ukyo and Ryoga going... they're less persistent, and might actually end up falling for eachother in the end....^^''. Anywayz, great chapter, update soon!
 Reviewed By: A very pleased Tenchi fan  On: November 21, 2004 17:20 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a very good, original story. I do think though that Ryoko's reaction to this engagement would have been to just grab Tenchi and make a run for it. I also think that since Tenchi's grandfather ran away from Jurai rather than marry a woman he didn't love, he would have objected much mor strongly. In the OAV version I believe Tenchi will marry all of his suitors, but if the universe Tenchi can have only one wife, Ayeka would be best for him. There really did seem to be a strong attraction between them and Ryoko must have commited many serious crimes, perhaps even murder, to have become so notorious. In the episode where she ties Tenchi up and drags him off to a cave to 'seduce' him, she is very much like the space pirate of "the Mihoshi Special", who kidnaped and assaulted the police investigator played by Tenchi. I also think Tenchi sees Sasami as a little sister. The universe Mihoshi is more clutzy with few of the redeeming qualities of the OAV Mihoshi. Lastly the universe Washu and Kiyone seem to feel only strong affection for Tenchi such as one would have for a brother. I hope Tenchi's abilities will be increased. He should be able to develop all the abilities Kagato displayed since he is of the direct line and more powerful than his grandfather. I do hope to see this fine story completed.
 Reviewed By: anonymous Tenchi fan  On: November 21, 2004 17:10 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a very good, original story. I do think though that Ryoko's reaction to this engagement would have been to just grab Tenchi and make a run for it. I also think that since Tenchi's grandfather ran away from Jurai rather than marry a woman he didn't love, he would have objected much mor strongly. In the OAV version I believe Tenchi will marry all of his suitors, but if the universe Tenchi can have only one wife, Ayeka would be best for him. There really did seem to be a strong attraction between them and Ryoko must have commited many serious crimes, perhaps even murder, to have become so notorious. In the episode where she ties Tenchi up and drags him off to a cave to 'seduce' him, she is very much like the space pirate of "the Mihoshi Special", who kidnaped and assaulted the police investigator played by Tenchi. I also think Tenchi sees Sasami as a little sister. The universe Mihoshi is more clutzy with few of the redeeming qualities of the OAV Mihoshi. Lastly the universe Washu and Kiyone seem to feel only strong affection for Tenchi such as one would have for a brother. I hope Tenchi's abilities will be increased. He should be able to develop all the abilities Kagato displayed since he is of the direct line and more powerful than his grandfather. I do hope to see this fine story completed.
 Title: Flamers
Reviewed By: Hyperman [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 21, 2004 12:49 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm surprised that you've been getting flames, you obviously have great talent; so I'm going to give you a bit of advice. Flame the Flamers! Do what you have to to track them down and then Flame the Hell out of the bastards!!!. Nothing upsets me more than people who trash talk other people's work because they can only wish to write or be half as creative as you or any other writer. Well its your call, but you shouldn't be getting Flamed. I love your story and can't wait for the next chapter. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!
 Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in)  On: November 08, 2004 14:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Grrr..... I don't like this Jin guy, he sounds like a real bastard to me! Poor Akane, I wonder wats gonna happen to her? Anywayz, great chapter, hope u update soon!
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