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Reviewed By: Shadow_Hitokiri [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read a lot of Eva-stories, most of them are all the same... Like Asuka and Shinji love or hate each other, or they have something to do with Rei and Shinji. But your story is different, because it has emotion in it. But maybe you should make Asuka a bit more pushy and bossy towards Shinji. It's still a good story, hope you'll continnue with it.
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Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 18:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a very good start on a story i hope you plan on wrighting more in the future
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Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 21:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nicely done, a different pace with good character development, I enjoyed reading that… Good music selection as well. :)
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