| "Shattered Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: o.Oooooooh!
Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 03:30 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
o.O this may sound strange but i think i like this guy whos the vampire!^^(remembers how she sucked her bro dry)::shiver::didnt know they drank that much......well awsome story!^^ so goin on my faves!^^update please!^^
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Reviewed By: Meletina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 03:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good...I'm also writting a Vampire story but I think that yours is way better. Keep it up!!! ~~~Meletina~~~
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Reviewed By: Yoshiko Hiyokai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 10:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
good so far, it sounds odley familiar though...it's about time authors got back to the basic vampire horror stories! thank you very much for your consideration of my story, and thank you for the reviews. hope to see more of this soon!
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Title: Chapter 2: Bloodlust Nightmare Review
Reviewed By: Infamous Bamf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 19:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ugh, I wish this site clocked what chapter you're reviewing. Anyway, how that Rini is a vampire, what will happen next? Right now, it feels like the story can branch into lots of directions, but which one will you take? I'll wait for an update to find out.
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Title: Chapter 1 Review
Reviewed By: Infamous Bamf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 19:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I assume this surrealism the character is experiencing is her process of turning into a vampire? I wonder how she'll feel when it's all over?
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Reviewed By: Infamous Bamf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 19:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
The main character seems a little boring, but I assume that'll all change with the meaning of this guy. In any case, you did a great job setting up the story. I will check out the other chapters.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 16:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Meep! Poor Maitland, he didn't deserve that! ;_; Who's the vampire stalker? Must...know... ok, I'll wait for the weekend!
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Reviewed By: Yoshiko Hiyokai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yey?!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 14:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Did you put the first chapter before the prologue? Anyway, tis good! So that's who the person who died is. Please update soon. ^-^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 13:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it so far. it's really good, very descriptive. Update soon, please.
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