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| "Unkown" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 11:30 CDT
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I like this story. great job. please update soon.
| Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i agree with nostalgic, OC are better than yaoi (in my opinion), and they're easy to come up with, you can make em however the hell you want! no following personalities and whatnot. try to get your computer fixed please, i'd like to continue reading this story. ps. hanabi.. XD i cracked up laughing at that, i shoulda seen it coming
| Reviewed By: Honey sue On: July 16, 2005 22:57 CDT
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please continue it...
| Reviewed By: Nostalgic On: September 16, 2004 11:31 CDT
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Pair him up with an OC, better than yaoi.
| Reviewed By: Nostalgic On: September 16, 2004 11:31 CDT
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Pair him up with an OC, better than yaoi.
| Title: Anti-Yaoi FC
Reviewed By: Ryu the IP On: August 31, 2004 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your style, though you had lots of errors, though mainly typos (missng leters). As far as creativity...well the team thing was just a flop for me, though I like the idea of Gaara and Naruto being friends. You never really ellaborated on the techs he learned from Kyubi and Shukaku (I know, summoning, but that's only for one B-day). ] Also, you made it fairly apparent that Sakura seemed VERY interested in Naruto, so if you don't make her his girl, you'll be a tease! All I truly have to say about couples is, don't you dare do yaoi. I, being a guy, can't stand it, more of all being a straight guy... I do love Sakura, because well, I like to think of her, well, out of character. ^_^; She could be great for Naruto, and she's got the right passion for them to be a perfect couple. True in the real story she's a total...bitch...and stuck up, self centered. She has a big heart, and it's your story. You can make her as perfect of a girl as you can imagine! Though as it is your story, it's not my choice. That's my input though. Loved the fic, can't wait to read more of it. Don't make it yaoi >.> or I'll be forced to never read it again ;_; BTW, read my FF The Leaf's Five!
| Reviewed By: Hen Na Ikimono [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kyyyaaaa~~!! I luv it!! A romance between two doemons!! >_< WAAh!! (got over-exited) Please write some more! I want to know what will happend next!
| Reviewed By: Johnvitt On: August 17, 2004 14:50 CDT
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Just an idea for your pairing. Hinata and Naru has been way over used and Yaio just does not seem right for this fic. The idea that Naruto would go out with Ino is interesting and not used often, in fact I have never seen a fic with that pairing. I like it. My opinion is that you should go for that one. Of course these are just my opinions.
| Reviewed By: Johnvitt On: August 17, 2004 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, I like the concept you have thought up. It also reads very well. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Gopu On: July 22, 2004 11:32 CDT
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Great start
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