| "He She Me We II" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 15:24 CST
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That was a sucky thing to do, leaving off like that. Writers block is NOT an excuse. When you begin a story, you make a commitment. People read your story and expect to see it finished, and not meeting their expectations means not fufilling your commitment and not coming through for your readers. If you have writers block, it's your responsibility to think things through and get over it. When I read your author's note, it was like a slap in the face for me. There is always a reason to continue a story that's unfinished, and that reason is to tie everything together and give your readers the ending they deserve, especially in an emotional fic like this one. It's disrespectful, because you aren't writing this just for yourself. You might know how everything turns out, but we don't. If you're lazy enough that you don't feel the need to properly finish a story, then maybe you shouldn't be writing fanfiction at all. I for one am not going to read any more writing if I think you won't follow the story through to the end. Congratulations- you've just lost yourself a reader. And I am NOT flaming you, I'm reminding you of your responsibilities as a writer and showing you the consequences of neglecting them. Constructive criticism. Learn from it.
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Title: aww ^__^U
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei_off ze line On: December 07, 2004 18:12 CST
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it was good and keep writen XD
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 18:50 CST
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awwww... realizations are so hard sometimes =/ I'll be around for the next one ^_^
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Reviewed By: Someone Else's Face On: November 18, 2004 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For some reason I can't seem to open the 9th Chapter. Maybe it's just me, but if it's not ... PLEASE FIX IT! I LOVE YOUR STORY! I GOTTA' KEEP READIN' IT!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well, read both and I seem to have caught up to you. There are many stories out there that refer to Youko changing the sex of the baby when he entered Shiori's womb, but this is a whole different take on those. So far it's interesting and I'll be back to see what happens next ^_^
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 17:23 CST
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OH MY GODDITY GOD GOD! Thish ish amazing! *glued to the computer screen* At first the idea of a female Kurama kind of kept me away- but now I am soooo glad I read this! And Kuro-chan's here tooooooooo! YAY! You have his personality fine, I guess- I hear he's supposed to be really cool and self-confident (aka an egomaniac) but he likes to mess with peoples heads too- I have no idea what I'm talking about. JUST DON'T TURN HIM INTO AN ASSHOLE! *glomps Kuronue* It was so sad when Kurama broke up with Hiei... T_T Poor poor Hiei. Poor poor Kura-chan. *sniffle* And then Yusuke slapped Kurama- I was like- (O_O) And then the potion thingy didn't work! And I was like (O_O) again! ACK! Now I'm high and I have to go read the prequel and eat Halloween candy! Byeeeeee! *scampers off*
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Title: T.T
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei_Not_Logged_In On: October 15, 2004 12:39 CDT
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poor poor kurama *sniffle*
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Title: YAY?!
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei_Not_Logged_In On: October 03, 2004 00:12 CDT
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It looks as though a happy ending might be in our future xD keep writing and I wish you luck ^__^
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazy Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 15:58 CDT
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*cries* This story is so sweet!!!! Keep writing!!! It's really good and I wanna see Kurama and Hiei back togeter! It's a great story!
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Reviewed By: IcedFireRose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 07:31 CDT
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This is good! I can't believe you HIT Kurama, Yusuke!! What did i tell you about hitting people? Yusuke: *stares at the floor* Me: you should apologize! Keep updating! ~@};---~--
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Title: OMFG?!
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei_Not_Logged_In On: September 15, 2004 16:47 CDT
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YUSUKE SLAPPED KURAMA?! T.T IT'S GONNA BEH OK KURAMA?! IT'S GONNA BE OK T.T *slaps yusuke* YOU BAKA EVIL EVIL MAN?! >
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Title: wahhhhhh?!
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei_Not_Logged_In On: September 07, 2004 18:38 CDT
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So good T.T plz write more T.T
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazy Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 18:49 CDT
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YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!! I love this story! It's brillent!!!!! Keep going!
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Title: Yippie xD
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei_Not_Logged_In On: August 27, 2004 17:40 CDT
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Yesh kuro is a mystery isn't he...~^__^~ but me likes him..keep writing star xD
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Reviewed By: Chibi Trey On: August 09, 2004 18:12 CDT
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I have the movue, saw it 4 times, and I still don't know what Kuronue's personality is like! Crap, im slow lol. Please update soon, this is getting really interesting
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