| "Lonely Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Tai-Mei On: August 06, 2004 07:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi a i liked it hehe. well can u tell me when ya update id really appreciate it. TNGOtaguro@aol.com
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Reviewed By: silver-dagger-113 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 12:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, now you have to write more. Why? Because you can't just leave us hanging! Nice first chapter.
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Title: *sparkly eyes*
Reviewed By: Cody Saoyrn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Auuh, the lovely fluffiness! I feel so sad for Jonouchi ;__; This needs more. Much more! UPDAAATE. Wah, onegai! I'll give you a puppy-Jou plushie...? *worships*
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Reviewed By: solarsenshi On: July 24, 2004 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! I see some angstyness coming up too ... -hint- you're writing style is really nice n_n
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Reviewed By: Kuroi Bara no Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 19:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmmmm.... how's Kaiba gonna react to that I wonder. Nice start, keep it up.
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