| "Forbidden Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | 
| Reviewed By: SerenaJr.  On: June 23, 2005 22:40 CDT Comment/Review:
 I love this story and I hope you continue it and also make it more of and romantic scene in the end.
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| Reviewed By: Lilcoonybree  On: August 15, 2004 22:50 CDT Rating(s):
 Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
 U have to continue! If you dont, I will never review again!!!!!! lol
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| Reviewed By: OHHH  On: July 29, 2004 20:11 CDT Comment/Review:
 ohhh I like... Please continue
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