| "Burning Love" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Burning Love ...
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not too bad ... a lil confusing, but not that bad ...
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Title: MY MY MY
Reviewed By: Magnus Wolfbane [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
um................ it's ok............mine is BETTER!! !HAHA!! but really not to shabby
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Reviewed By: vivaperu! On: October 29, 2004 20:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is confusing. You should really work on your grammer and spelling and the characters are out of character. Also you should be careful when posting the chapter because in either chapter 2 or 3 the other chapters were posted in it as well. Work on fixing it and it could be good.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 20:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
[in reply to your e-mail) No, it's not confused as in I don't know who's speaking or something, I'm confused because of terrible grammer, repeated sentences, and much more.
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Title: no name
Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry, but this is going to turn out as a flame. But, I read one chapter and a little of the second chapter, and was already confused. Thats not a good sign. I could already tell the characters were way out of character, and that this story was going to amount to nothing. Sorry, but this story sucks.
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Reviewed By: Lady Raven On: October 13, 2004 22:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm confused??? what the hell is going on here??????????
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