| "The evil rises" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: prophet04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 11:47 CDT
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This is good. The word opponent was used way 2 much on the 1st chapter , but I like the story.
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Reviewed By: Timebound [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 18:35 CDT
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Nice little story you've got going on here. I rather like the Dalton-is-a-servant one. And why is it when you say 'the One', I immediately envision an evil Keanu Reves from the Matrix? *sigh* Too much Matrix lately.. Annnyway. Its almost sweet the way Alfador shows up and 'saves' Magus. I hope we hear more from them later on. And poor Robo! *sniffle* But I can't wait to read more!
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