| "Sweet 16 redone" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 16:00 CST
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please o please update i realy whant to read the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Hatira (aka: dog_eared_freak147) On: January 13, 2005 19:17 CST
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great job, hope you update soon, ja!
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Reviewed By: baka_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 05:37 CST
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Wow! Your story is coming along quite nicely. It started out a little dry, but it's really interesting now. Keep up the good work, and try to be a tad more descriptive. One more thing: why do capitolize 'the'?
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Reviewed By: christinatails(forgot to login) On: December 01, 2004 08:04 CST
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Yay! You updated! Boo! There are impersonators! Not good! I wonder who the newcomer is. Please update soon! Buh-bye for now!
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Title: month and 1/2
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: November 27, 2004 10:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Month and a half since your last uipdate, pweeze update sooner, pweeze?-Kitsu
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Reviewed By: Kagome-chan2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story and i hope you update more because i would LOVE to continue reading it!!! You can reply at... imabutee@sbcglobal.net That is my e-mail... Thanx
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Title: hhmmmn
Reviewed By: dawn_e On: October 18, 2004 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo i like this one alot better!i read your previous story on fan fiction.net i belive it was you...it was extremely close to this one so i can only assume that it was you since i didnt get the author,i like this vertion ALOT better its longer becaus youve added more detail which in turn has made it a much better story! ^.^ i like-e! keep up the great work! *dawn_e*
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Reviewed By: firelord im not sined in On: October 12, 2004 17:06 CDT
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great chapter keep up the great work update agin soon
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: October 10, 2004 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hope that chappie's coming along soon, I love this fic, I want to see the end of it.-Kitsu
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Title: ok
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: October 09, 2004 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story once, on Inu no Uchi, I never got to see the end of it and you're already revising? awwww... Oh well, I hope I get to see the ficcy I missed soon!-Kitsu
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 08:49 CDT
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great chapter i cant wait to see kagomes and inuyashas memory sequenc update agin soon
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 01:35 CDT
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great your doing great work on this story i hope that you update agin soon great work so far
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 06:07 CDT
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just thout i whould ask you to please update soon so we dont have to whait so long for your updates i cant whait for your next chapter and i hope you all so update the origanl to but that is your desishen well i will ask one more time please update soon
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: HanyouGal (Offline) On: August 12, 2004 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey hey you'll be piling with reviews soon with such a great story! keep going okay!
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Reviewed By: christinatails(forgot to login) On: August 12, 2004 10:43 CDT
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Hooray! YOu updated! I hope they do find Taiken! And hooray! Hime is joining them! Grr! GET BACK HERE JIMAN! *chases him and trying to rip his head off* HOW DARE YOU CALL MY HALF SIS A WENCH! Please update soon! Buh-bye for now! *continues chasing him*
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 02:58 CDT
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that was a great chapter I hope that you update agin soon so that I can find out what happens next I am realy begining to injoy this story more than the origalal but I whant to sugest to you that maybe you can finish the first also and have two difrent vershins but that is for you to deside. once agin I wold like to say great story.
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Reviewed By: InuYoukaiGal1450 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 14:49 CDT
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noooooooooooooooooooooooooo.......... You can't just stop there! You have to keep on going...! *sniff* I hope Kagome and InuYasha and everyone can find Taiken in time! Is Kouga going to get the point that Kagome doesn't want him as more of a friend? And will InuYasha learn that Kagome's the only one for him? What's up with Jiman...? He seemed a little out of it, and I don't think it's just Taiken. Do you know if Nisume will be able to come through the well? That'd be so cool! But hey! It's your story! ^^;
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Reviewed By: christinatails(forgot to login) On: August 03, 2004 11:11 CDT
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Hooray! THey've been reunited! Hmm, you could have Taiken's close friend join them to rescue her father! THat's all I got. Well, please update soon! Buh-bye for now!
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Reviewed By: christinatails [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 10:00 CDT
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Love the story! Very well thought out! I'm going to read the first version! I just love reading! Please update soon! THis Fox hanyou's gotta go now! Buh-bye!
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Reviewed By: fanfic fanaticim a poet and i didnt know it [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 09:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's realy good, i don't see anything wrong so far and english is my best subject! please up date soon!?
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 01:34 CDT
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once agine i have to say your not going in to as much detail as rou original vershion but this one dose seem to have a beter plot to it so im kind of split on wich on i should pester you to update lol may be this one will get in to more de tail in later chapters ill have to whait and see wont i
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 00:07 CDT
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wow i hardly ever get to read any stories where Kags turns into a hanyou(and there my favs). i love the story :) hurry and update...
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Title: Kakkoi!
Reviewed By: InuYoukaiGal1450 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I hardly EVER find any like this! It's really fun to read and all! It's moving fast (which I like. Get's to the point quicker...! ^^;)I love it. I love Miroku's comment, too: "I agree with her, except for the last part," lol! I hope Kagome and them can all survive this! And I really hope you update! I love your story so much! If it's not to much, could you read mine? It's called From Two Worlds to Three. I really need someone to tell me what I'm doing wrong, but you don't need to if you don't want to! heh-heh Yeah! Keep writing! I wanna know what happens!!! InuYasha's better confess....-_- lol. Anyway, yep!
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 02:40 CDT
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your origanal story is great but if you think it will turn out beter in this redo then i encorage you to do so have fun with it but make shure that you dont abanden it becase this is really a great story but you dont seem to be going in to as much detail
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