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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 09:21 CDT
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"Next chapter up after I update other story (1-2 weeks at the most)" that didn't happen, now did it? ^_~ Good job. fast paced, lots of sex, is Hojo a creature of the nights? And who was that flying into Tokyo and about the 13 yr-old girl?
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Reviewed By: kiwarrier(not logged in) On: May 15, 2005 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You said '1-2 weeks at the most'. It's been almost 6 MONTHS!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lesa On: April 23, 2005 11:29 CDT
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this story is awesome! I like it when bad things happen to Kagome and Inuyasha, i'm not evil, but it makes the ending when they actually do live on forever a little bit better since they can last through so many chllenges, etc so, yeah, update soon, can't wait!!!
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Reviewed By: angelwing66 On: March 18, 2005 08:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woderful style of writing, there is not a better fanfiction in the world!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 09:42 CST
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Hello there...finally, getting a chance to read :) Well, your fic is definitely a "gosh, I wish that would really happen" one...first with Inu-Kag's easy confession of feelings, Inu's total denial of interest in Kikyo, Kikyo working with Naraku (makes us hate her even more), and Inuyasha killing Kikyo without remorse (all Kikyo-haters probably cried out in happiness over that). And of course, Mama Higurashi is completely accepting of her only daughter shagging with our beloved half demon. Side note, Mrs. H really is too accepting of everything in the anime and manga, ne? Again, like I said, your fic has all the elements of what any Inu-Kag fan wants. Just one question in my mind - even with a spell, I just find it hard to believe that Inu wouldn't be able to tell the difference between Kikyo and Kagome...one has a clay body, presumably no blood or pulse or body warmth while the other is alive and has the vital signs to prove it. On top of that, they smell different. I guess this had to be one heck of a powerful spell that Kikyo used? Of course, I'm wondering what is going on in poor Hojo's head...and if he's going to cause problems for our favorite couple in the future. Then there's also the issue of Kouga...is he aware that Kags and Inu have mated? Hmm...
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Reviewed By: sesshomarulvr101 On: January 26, 2005 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it.It is one of my favorite Inuyasha fanfictions.I can't wait till you write more.Bye.^-^
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 17:53 CST
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I luv this story!! Update Soon!! *And a word of advice GET RID OF SHIPPO!!* all he does is get in the way! Your story is good but please PLEASE get rid of Shippo! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Evangelion842 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 04:03 CST
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Really good! Please write more soon!
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Reviewed By: monkey face89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a really good I like it can write faster please.
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Reviewed By: its good On: October 31, 2004 14:47 CST
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its good so plz update soon.
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Title: T_T WOW T_T
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon and get them back together so if not through the well i guess he will have to wait 500 years to see her
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 03:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic! I really like it a lot, and I can't wait to read more ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 21:09 CDT
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I like the way you sorta went along with what happened in the series. Not very many stories do that (including me) I love it, please update soon! Oh, Inuaysha never would kill kagome..maybe kikyou, not kaogme! at least thats what we all hope, keep writing i love it!
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Title: Comtinue Please!!
Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 06:57 CDT
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PLEASE CONTINUE!! I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!!
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Kagess On: August 27, 2004 13:18 CDT
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This is the best story I've ever read!!! *sighs* if only it would really happen...
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