Reviewed By: ranko On: April 05, 2002 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read many fics that follow the same storyline, this isn't very original.i think it was nice that you killed genma off, but their should have been more details. plus a fic without resentment between ranma and ryoga is a little boring, add some magic to this to spice it up |
