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Title: hellow
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
New twist, you like teasing me? Well I think That Pan and Juu would make a good pair even just tepoarry. well looking foward to next up-date Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Tai-04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 00:23 CDT
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ha ha, sandie? the name is from the talk thingy with Pattie!! ha ha, good chappie!!!!!!!! i love this song!! its on my friends xanga!!
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this could go eather way dose she realy love Zack or Trunks? Well hope you up-date so I can see this is getting better and better. I like how you put the twist in keeps me guessing Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: (LadyKATT) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(laughing rolling on the floor) Ha poor kids well I like how this is turning out will Pan get together with Trunks or the other guy. Well this is turning out realy good. hope you update soon. bye bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Tai-04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 00:11 CDT
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ha ha this is good, lol, most of the reviews r from me, lol maybe i should leave u alone..............
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, I am realy enjoying this fic. it keeps getting better as you go. Looking foward to up-date. Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Tai-04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 16:44 CDT
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shannon is a total bitch, lol, argh i hate her, lol, u made her so real
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I am realy enjoying your story please update soon. Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: frozen_in_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 13:05 CDT
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I knoooooooow!!! And I hate Pan and Trunks pairings!!! god dang it! I'm gonna make it so....... can't tell you~!!!! hahahahaha. :P okay, well i didn't want it to turn out all lovy and mushy and crap... THAT'S WHY I FIX IT!
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Title: Hi again
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI, Well I this is turning out realy well will a love bond turn out for Pan and Trunks? Well up-date soon Bye BYe LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Tai-04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 23:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is good, lol ha ha ha srry, really hyper, lol
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Reviewed By: Tai-04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 21:41 CDT
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HEY!!!! Love it so far, and it has my name in it!! * smile proudly* haha, update soon ok? lol
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that is realy cool! like what I am reading so far. Will Pan toltaly change? Well as you have said to me Up-date soon Please! P.S. Thanks for all the reviews it realy helped me and yes sequil on its way! Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Tai-04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 22:38 CDT
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HA HA this is so good!! Love the chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Tai-04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 20:40 CDT
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HA HA HA, I LOVE IT!!! The song is my fav. one out of that Cd, umm... damn i forgot wat the hell its called hehehe, update soon
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