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Title: LadyKATT
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 02:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I agree with you if flamers do not like your fic they shopuld not read!!!! Hope you do not stop wrighting please. This fic is diffrent and that is why is is so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please if you still feel up-to it continue I would love to see how it ends. (Big hug and thums up) Hope to see your next update. Please Frozen_in_shadows do not give up that means that flamer wins. Hope to here from you soon. Bye Bye Your friend and fellow wrighter LadyKATT
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Title: STUPID STORY!!!!!
Reviewed By: Leo the Weo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
What are you doing!!!!!! First of all, 17 is dead and second of all, since him and 18 are twins, that means that they are both about 17 or 18 years old!!! Does that mean 18 has kids when she was 5!!!! Zack and Juu are stupid to go with Pan!!!! Pan should go with Trunks and I hate your style of writing. Too many twists and it's so retarded. This story was a waste of my time and it sucks. I wouldn't recommend it to anyone on my life. Shannon should have stayed evil and it sounds like Pan and Trunks' kiss meant nothing! That was pathetic!!!!!!
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Title: HI
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor Pan she is so confused and hurt. hope things wor out. Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Title: Go Pan!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Cool! This is turning out so good! Hope Juu can return her feelinngs. Poor Trunks he will not like this I think. Well up-date soon Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 08:54 CDT
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Evily cliffy. That was mean stopping it there. Will Trunks retalait or just let her go? Please up-date Bye BYe LadyKATT
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
up-date soon. this is turning out realy good Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Tai-04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 22:38 CDT
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this is so good!! LOL, ha ha anyways, cant wait to see the next chappie!!
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Reviewed By: Tai-04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 18:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is so good!! UPDATE SOON!!
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Title: hellow
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
New twist, you like teasing me? Well I think That Pan and Juu would make a good pair even just tepoarry. well looking foward to next up-date Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Tai-04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 00:23 CDT
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ha ha, sandie? the name is from the talk thingy with Pattie!! ha ha, good chappie!!!!!!!! i love this song!! its on my friends xanga!!
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this could go eather way dose she realy love Zack or Trunks? Well hope you up-date so I can see this is getting better and better. I like how you put the twist in keeps me guessing Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: (LadyKATT) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(laughing rolling on the floor) Ha poor kids well I like how this is turning out will Pan get together with Trunks or the other guy. Well this is turning out realy good. hope you update soon. bye bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Tai-04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 00:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
ha ha this is good, lol, most of the reviews r from me, lol maybe i should leave u alone..............
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, I am realy enjoying this fic. it keeps getting better as you go. Looking foward to up-date. Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Tai-04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 16:44 CDT
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shannon is a total bitch, lol, argh i hate her, lol, u made her so real
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