| "Taboo lifestyle." Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Taboo Lifestyle.
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: wow, how weird
Reviewed By: Weapon-01 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lose the HTML codes. Also your grammer is fractured often enough that I have to go over a sentence a few time to understand it. But the story is great, you should also focus on taking your time and exploring more detail in each chapter. A little improvment can and will go a long way!
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Reviewed By: greebo45 On: August 05, 2005 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree with those other guys get usagi or some of the other senshi in on it
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Reviewed By: hentai king On: April 18, 2005 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
you said you wanted sugestions... how about usagi catches them and wants to play too
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow, freaky pairing! how about serena finds out?
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Reviewed By: jyut On: September 09, 2004 20:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great installment
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Reviewed By: Guni004` On: August 20, 2004 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story. but i would ask that you put more evclusive lemons caise yeah i would like that. well ok great story and continue soon and make the lemons more exclusive.k^^
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Reviewed By: jyut On: August 03, 2004 18:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why not let them get caught by Usagi.
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Reviewed By: jyut On: August 02, 2004 17:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope you write more about them. Or him making it with other female characters in Sailor Moon.
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Reviewed By: 2sexy4you On: August 02, 2004 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh. Love this story. You must continue this love affair between them. I must read more. Make the lemons a little more exclusive. If you know what i mean^_~
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Reviewed By: Unknown Flamer On: August 02, 2004 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to lose the HTML encoding.
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