| "Youkai, Jubaku, and Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: the evil fluffy muffin queen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good! but as you probably realized, the 4th chapter isnt showing up, and that makes me very sad. please fix it? just delete the chapter, and then re-upload it. i really want to read! you left us off with a cliffie! i think the main pairing should be kyo/kagome, since kyo is so much like kagome, and try not to inu-bash please? thanks, and update soon!!! please!!! i love this fic!
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Title: wtf?
Reviewed By: Haruka-Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 14:06 CST
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where is chapter 4 it is all, well... blank sorry 'bout the title just the result of a mood swing !!!!!!!!!(currently humming) sorry for the extreme randomness
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Reviewed By: alonlygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 19:49 CST
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what the hell.....*twitch* please put something in chap 4 other than that wha bout kagome and haru *batts eyelashes innocely*
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Title: umm.......
Reviewed By: armybrat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for Kag/Haru...... also your last chapter didn't go through
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Title: it was good excepted one thing
Reviewed By: phantomphan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
on the last chapter on Youkai, Jubaku, and Miko" did not go though.
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Title: injuyasha_1234
Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that I really enjoy your fic and that I only just started reading FB just yesterday and I like how you used the characters in this fic. I don't like however how chapter 4 has no chapter.... I can't wait to find out what happens and I hope that you write something for this fic soon... until then, With love, Mari-chan
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 00:02 CST
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please update soon i luv this fic. also chapter 4 is missing.
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Title: ...uumm
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
..... you have a missing chapter ...thats pethetic
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Reviewed By: Shadowed On: August 08, 2005 14:03 CDT
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KYAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ this story is really good! um...i would like to vote for Kagome/Kyo because i have yet to see a paring like that and i think they will be an awsome couple!!! ^^ Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: June 28, 2005 02:15 CDT
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the last chapter, unfortunate events, is not showing up...I would like to continue reading this!!! its fun!!! Kagome/HAru and Tohru/Kyo
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Reviewed By: coolgalz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 03:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The newest chapter is missin. What happened to it? Anyway plz update!!!
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Title: Missing Chapter
Reviewed By: ChaosKree8er2 On: May 30, 2005 18:39 CDT
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Your newest chapter is missing...there'e no writing on the page...
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Title: meli
Reviewed By: Chibes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 17:58 CDT
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Me agaiN, YUKI/THORU KAG/KYO AND KAGURA/INU
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Title: ???
Reviewed By: meli [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 17:57 CDT
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Uh... was there supposed to be a chapter 4???? Because I'm sorry I didn't see one or does my laptop hate me? I really love the story so far, and how'd InuYasha get there so quickly???
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Title: u must continue!!!!
Reviewed By: vampirgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
inu should be with tohru k? now continue!! u can not leave us hangin like that!! wat happened 2 the 4th sh?? pleze continue ASAP!!!
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