| "Relaxation?" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Bbabe13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated this an ten because you used an idea that I've never seen before, and I really liked it. But you really need to update more, pleeeeeeesssssseeeeeee update soooooonnnnnn with a looooooooonnnnngggggg chapter, or at least a lot of small chapters, anyway my point is it was extremely good so update quickly, Damnit!!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: August 01, 2004 04:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great beginnging. Please update real soon.
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Reviewed By: poetic On: July 31, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love the story line! pleaes update soon! on a completely unrelated subject, im itchy! (^-^)p.s my username is fanfic fanaticim a poet and i didnt know it, but im to lazy to log in right now.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 07:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great 1st chapter i loved it PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! ^_^
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