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Reviewed By: kiam On: July 09, 2005 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you these rateings because it made me laugh so hard, and i love to laugh!!! anyway, this fic made want to read even more. Everytime i started to read, i couldn't wait to get to the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 14:28 CDT
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This story is hilarious!!! Yami and his love for pens. I wonder what Marik and Malik did with the roaches in the jar? I get creeped out when I see a roach. So, Bakura has cravings for ice cream? and Ryou got Chocolate Chip Cookie Dough (my absolute favorite flavor of ice cream)!! My idea for the next chapter is when Bakura is chasing the ice cream truck, the ice cream man looks to see who is running and starts to speed up and Bakura yells "come back here!!! I want my ice cream!!!" and Bakura speeds up to catch up, but the ice cream truck is too fast. After that, the ice cream truck runs out of gas and Bakura has this evil look on his face and demands the ice cream man to give him his ice cream before he sends his mind to the Shadow Realm. Hope this idea will work for you. Good job on this fic and update!!!
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Title: Whoot!
Reviewed By: The Deceased BlueMonkeyCrossing On: July 08, 2005 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I added it to my favorites before my account was deleted. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 06:05 CST
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omfg, that was so funny, I should'ver read this earlier *cracks up* plz update soon. hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
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Reviewed By: StarWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ Me likie lots! Bakura and sticky notes and Ice cream. O.O AHH! And Yami and pens, even worse. A pen collection. Unspeakable. Marik and Malik. Priceless plotters. ^-^ And Yugi's and other random people are stuck in the middle of everything! Muahahahahaha!!! I think that describles just about all of the people who are ALIVE. ^_^;; Lol. *starts chanting* UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! I hope Bakura ends up in a hospital >:) Hehehehehehehe. Or Yugi ^__^!! Or, ALL OF THEM!!!! *insert more evil laughter* o.o;; I'm crazy Buahahahahahaha! etc... Did I mention that you should update? And this is kinda a long review. This is also kinda my only review for this story ^_^;; And I really have no idea why I'm so hyper. o_o Do I even have ideas? WHY AM I STILL TYPING?!?!? >_<
Just update and put me out of my mysery please. --_--
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Title: YAOI LUVR FOREVER (it says this all over my binder reminder! Just DARE me to show you!)
Reviewed By: Danielle-chan! On: October 27, 2004 22:23 CDT
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1. A few spelling errors... eh. If you want I can print this out and circle them in red and make a huge deal out of it, like the melodramatist that I am... 2. I just realized... when did Bakura see The Wizard of Oz? And does he know that a guy committed suicide on the set? 3. ^^ Ryou's such a sweet person. You know, I think this has shounen-ai potential. ^_^ *suddenly wearing a slash forever shirt (March. You. Me. Kamikaze-con. We go and buy Yaoi shirts. There's TONS of them. There was a guy selling them, and he looked like he was REALLY enjoying himself... not.)* TENDERSHIPPING! WHEE! 4. Ok, which one is Malik and which one is Marik? Because if Malik is the yami... he knows what a chainsaw is, but not a stapler? ~_~ Typical. 5. ^_^ I updated Chapter 5 that we wrote! (We end up wearing scooby doo costumes. It's weird. o.o;;)
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Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHA!!!!! *has fallen of his chair and is on ground laughing* *in between gasps for air* that.....was........hialrious.....please....make...more.....soon *starts to laugh to hard and is soon unconcious* @__@ shane.
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Title: This is so funny
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 00:28 CDT
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this is so funny, and Ew roaches in the blender, thats just sick lol.
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Title: Girly scream
Reviewed By: Ryan-Kun On: October 25, 2004 22:24 CDT
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AAAAAAAH! Never thought Kaiba will do such a thing, I mean giddy school girl hehehehehehe nice one! Man, I sound like that green kid in teen titans *_* Don't watch it ehehehehe no one can make me!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Me Mom: You, watch that cartoon show called teen titans! Me: Yes ma'am -watches Teen Titans- -looks at you- Almost no one --_______-- Update Soon!
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Title: Mwehe
Reviewed By: Ryan-kun On: October 18, 2004 22:11 CDT
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That was a short cake ^_^ Anyway it's still good
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Reviewed By: unimportant bystander#12 On: October 18, 2004 16:37 CDT
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That chapter was short but funny.I liked it.
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Title: HIYO!
Reviewed By: Callie1075 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 22:03 CDT
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Ish short... but that's ok! You're next chapter will be longer! ......Right? o.o() 'TWAS FUNNY! Especially when Marik/Malik said, "We matured in a week" and then Marik/Malik replied "XP No!" I can't remember which. o.o()
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Title: No title!
Reviewed By: Dark Queen On: September 30, 2004 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ha-ha!!! luv it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashapup-no sign in On: September 21, 2004 22:34 CDT
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laughing so hard, head almoust flies off! thats too funny please update as soon as you can thanks~Storm / inuyashapup
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Title: -meep-
Reviewed By: XxWolf_GirlxX On: September 05, 2004 18:56 CDT
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I love how Bakura attacked Ryou with Sticky Notes XD That was priceless
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