| "Straight and Lonely on 2/14" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: cloud9kerri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this! You've taken a character that only had two personality traits in 7 volumes of manga and given him a completely believable personality with a one shot! I read in your livejournal that you're planning a sequel, I'd really like to see it, especially with what you said you had in mind for it.
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Reviewed By: magegirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! I really liked this. congrats on giving Ted his chance in the spotlight. You did a good job on giving him a personality. I would love to see everyones reaction when he gives JJ that kiss of graditude ^.^
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: Icewind [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've already commented about this fic on the ML but I just had to say something here aswell. I really, really enjoyed this. You gave Ted an interesting persona and did a wonderful job with the other characters too. I can utterly see Ted owning a dog. The writing style was great and you really managed to make the reader feel like he/she were seeing things from Ted's eyes. It was interesting to get a new perspective from a character that rarely gets to shine in the FAKE manga. THANK YOU for taking a shot at the challenge I posted awhile back. It was much more than I could've hoped for. Great stuff, keep up the good work. :)
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Reviewed By: Calico Ava-chan On: August 03, 2004 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ That's adorable! Kudos for sucessfully pulling off a Ted fic. JJ's cute in this too; I can so see him and the baby-love talk. The thought and depth that's obviously gone into this is astounding. You have my highest praise.
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