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Reviewed By: cellia On: April 30, 2005 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I usually stay away from Sakura/Naruto or Sakura/Sasuke like the plague, but the summary made me curious and I clicked. Am so glad I did. Actual *hot* sex, but that also seemed real and full of feelings (albeit messed up sometimes). A wonderful, tender story where I could feel equally for Naruto and Sakura. And I like a Sakura who could be a tough medic and also continue her old emotional dominance over Naruto. The only thing I thinked you dropped the ball on was Sasuke. Just a little too much "this character sux. he is mean and has a tiny dick." I'm not the biggest Sasuke fan, but it felt like the author was a little too against him/unfair to him--which was distracting as a reader and gave me a little sympathy for the deviul with him. The singlemindedness about goal relating to climax was so clever, but the impact was weakened as you just kept piling more "this guy is a meanie" on. Shouldn't we see something about why Sakura (and Naruto) cared for him, even if he is an annoying SOB? Anyway, that was just a niggling thing. The main story was *wonderful.* Well-written and realistic-feeling in characterization. I really enjoyed it! Thanks for posting it!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 14, 2005 20:26 EDT
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I'm not sure how to describe this, it was...different. Very dark and in many ways had the feel of something that could happen, Sakura constantly deluding herself even as Naruto continued to wait for her. Perhaps in time he would be rewarded yet it seems for then and now he would have to wait... The lemons were interesting but in truth I've read far too many over the years and these days I no longer pay such scenes much attention. Fantasy is nice but it still isn't reality. I think I may have to go searching for the other parts of this on FF.Net as I would like to see what more there is. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: thank you!
Reviewed By: ran1 On: April 10, 2005 14:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful read. You added a tragic and poignant sort of depth to Naruto's character, and it's beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Illjwamh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolute brilliance. I loved it. The technique of using sex to drive the story as opposed to a needless extra is wonderful indeed, and you interpreted the characters perfectly, as far as I'm concerned. It makes sense to me that Ino would figure it out before Sakura. This came recommended by someone at ff.net, and I'm glad for that. I really have nothing left to say, since this review was meant merely to dump lavish praise on you. The only thing I noticed were a number of typos, which explains the 8 up there. Other than that, practically flawless.
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Reviewed By: Suzuko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 03:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really have not read such a well writen fan fic like this in such a long time Naruto wise that is this is a really really good fanfic.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Sweet Jane On: November 14, 2004 20:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was freakin awesome! Very well done, *claps hands* Naruto/Sakura pairing = VERY sweet :) Hope you write more with this pairing, I'd read it.
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Reviewed By: Arashihawk On: October 08, 2004 12:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story here, You present a believable situation that is great to read. The sex scenes help drive the story along instead of being the entire story.
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Reviewed By: Marrion On: August 21, 2004 02:48 EDT
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If you want more feedback, you might want to post this on adultfanfiction.net. They are hungry for well-written, well-plotted lemons there!
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Reviewed By: GeshronTyler [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 06:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm glad I read your profile on ffnet a bit more thoroughly, or else I'd have missed this one. ^_^ I enjoyed this take on a possible Naruto/Sakura relationship. I like angsty, serious treatment of characters, especially if the piece ends with a pleasant resolution. "They fall in love and live happily ever after" quickly grows stale after all, so a messy relationship that has the characters muddle through it (and an author that takes the time to work throught it ^_^, appeals to me. This story is an interesting contrast to "Complications" and "Interlude: Life of a Modern Kage", but then the author conviently removed Sasuke as a possibility for a relationship, and so Sakura and Naruto had less issues to work through. ^_^ I look forward to your next work. Especially if it concerns Orochimaru's destruction. =P Geshron Tyler
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Reviewed By: Daknessvoid101 On: August 14, 2004 11:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...just wow. I absolutely loved this! The characterization, style, description and depth were all excellent! I believe that I have also read some of your works on FF.net, and as I recall, those were just as good! It is so rare to find a lemon that is more than just mindless sex, but actually portrays emotional depth, and explores sexuallity instead of exploiting it. I am very glad that I found this.
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Title: hmr
Reviewed By: hmr On: August 11, 2004 16:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! GREAT! BEst! More>? please... Great job!
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Title: three thumbs up!
Reviewed By: keishiko On: August 05, 2004 10:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely excellent. an intelligent, perceptive, precise, honest look at a fuck buddy relationship--definitely no easy feat. and yet not just an endless self-indulgent wallow in angst either, but a sensitive, mature work that actually isn't embarrassed to be all about love after all. i've never even seen a single naruto episode, but i didn't really need to--so that's probably another compliment for you. ^.^ i salute you truly! ^.^
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 10:44 EDT
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That was so sad. I feel so bad for Naruto and Sakura really needs a smack in the head, it sounds like Ino knows this too. Wonderful writting. cdk
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Reviewed By: Janet On: July 31, 2004 20:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic plz continue to write more. I love the Naru/Saku pairing there should be more of those. I will be waiting for more of your work.
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Reviewed By: Wolfstein [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 11:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, sexually explicit but in no sick way. Truely a piece of art.
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