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Reviewed By: Tonnerre [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2011 00:44 EDT
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I loved it, I created an account just so I could tell you how good you are. |
Reviewed By: Erratic Hippie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2011 16:36 EDT
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Wow. By far the BEST Naruto/Sakura (Naruto, PERIOD) fanfiction I have ever read. It's absolutely perfect. Enthralling, angsty/sexual and absolutely beautiful. I only wish there was more. |
Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 12:16 EDT
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Congratulations! You've been rec'd! The Reader's Have Chosen is a fanfiction recommendation community dedicated to finding the best of the best in fandoms across the boards, and sharing them with other authors and avid readers. Your story, "Something or Other: First and Only", has been rec'd and is now being voted on in the Monthly Poll: Naruto. Fellow fandom-aficionados will vote for their favorites of all the recommendations, and the stories with the most votes will be posted on the front page. You can find our website at (without spaces): http : // thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com You can find the Naruto Monthly Poll at (without spaces): http:// thereadershavechosen. eternflame. com/ forum/ index. php? topic= 1599.0
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Reviewed By: crazykiddeath [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 15:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story, one of the better Saku/Naru adult ones i've read
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Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 19:40 EDT
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Thank you for writing something that reminded me why I even read fanfiction. I've always loved anyone who could remind me that the really well made fictional characters can become 'real'. As an author you have seen all sides of the story just like your audience, but you reminded us that they can be like all of us. It's easy to watch Sasuke or Sakura do something wrong and automaticallly want to hate the mistakes, because on some level we can relate and on another they have been placed in a setting where they are supposed to be better than us. Everything was so utterly human that it went past that and I saw a trio making errors based on everything all three went through.
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Reviewed By: Corwyth [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 09:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Powerful. Thats all that can be said without tarnishing it. You captured human emotion well, and I'm glad to see someone who actually can do so believably.
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Reviewed By: Elysera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 00:06 EST
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How beautiful. I mean...truly. I don't think I've ever written a Naruto/Sakura I've liked so much. Naruto really never struck me as a...I don't know. A perceptive person? I guess that's how you've portrayed him. But truly, this is beautiful. It is so touching how he understands her and lets her go, because he knows that's what will make her happy. He understands that love is selfless and selfless is sacrificing and knowing how to let go. He knows when to stay silent, and he knows what she needs. He never takes and only gives. I find that so beautiful. Sorry, I didn't mean for this to turn into a huge rant, but this is truly spectacular. You are an amazing author. I don't think I've ever read a better Naruto/Sakura pairing.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Kikilo_Lea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 11:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is the best fanfic I've read ina while. You've done a great job of making Sakura seem like she's more than a fangirl of Sasuke. Even though I'm usually not a fan of NaruSaku, this fanfic changed my whole view of the pairing.
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Reviewed By: Roark28 On: September 21, 2005 16:51 EDT
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Omgawd. That was so f---ing beautiful.I got here from a recommendation by Sintari and I am just blown away. I love it. The angst was written perfectly and I love the way you used italics for emphasis too. That was totally my 40 mins of happiness for the day, thank you ^^ You're an awesome writer and I'll definitely look up your other works once I have time ♥
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Title: blissful
Reviewed By: sharingank [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 23:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Apparently, I never reviewed this...and if I did...I..er..lost track of my review...yeah. Hee-hee. So, I was in the mood, and decided, 'I'm going to read Something or Other again!' *is a pile of goo* I'd forgotten how ridiculously HOT that sex scene was. *ADORATION LEAGUE LOVIN'* XD There were a couple random mis..somethings (you wrote she when it should have been he at one point), but other than that, fabulous. *reads once more*
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Reviewed By: mr3vi1m0nk3y On: June 29, 2005 20:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best fics i have ever read period.
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Reviewed By: cellia On: April 30, 2005 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I usually stay away from Sakura/Naruto or Sakura/Sasuke like the plague, but the summary made me curious and I clicked. Am so glad I did. Actual *hot* sex, but that also seemed real and full of feelings (albeit messed up sometimes). A wonderful, tender story where I could feel equally for Naruto and Sakura. And I like a Sakura who could be a tough medic and also continue her old emotional dominance over Naruto. The only thing I thinked you dropped the ball on was Sasuke. Just a little too much "this character sux. he is mean and has a tiny dick." I'm not the biggest Sasuke fan, but it felt like the author was a little too against him/unfair to him--which was distracting as a reader and gave me a little sympathy for the deviul with him. The singlemindedness about goal relating to climax was so clever, but the impact was weakened as you just kept piling more "this guy is a meanie" on. Shouldn't we see something about why Sakura (and Naruto) cared for him, even if he is an annoying SOB? Anyway, that was just a niggling thing. The main story was *wonderful.* Well-written and realistic-feeling in characterization. I really enjoyed it! Thanks for posting it!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 14, 2005 20:26 EDT
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I'm not sure how to describe this, it was...different. Very dark and in many ways had the feel of something that could happen, Sakura constantly deluding herself even as Naruto continued to wait for her. Perhaps in time he would be rewarded yet it seems for then and now he would have to wait... The lemons were interesting but in truth I've read far too many over the years and these days I no longer pay such scenes much attention. Fantasy is nice but it still isn't reality. I think I may have to go searching for the other parts of this on FF.Net as I would like to see what more there is. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: thank you!
Reviewed By: ran1 On: April 10, 2005 14:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful read. You added a tragic and poignant sort of depth to Naruto's character, and it's beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Illjwamh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolute brilliance. I loved it. The technique of using sex to drive the story as opposed to a needless extra is wonderful indeed, and you interpreted the characters perfectly, as far as I'm concerned. It makes sense to me that Ino would figure it out before Sakura. This came recommended by someone at ff.net, and I'm glad for that. I really have nothing left to say, since this review was meant merely to dump lavish praise on you. The only thing I noticed were a number of typos, which explains the 8 up there. Other than that, practically flawless.
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