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| "Last Battles" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | Reviewed By: LUCIFARA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 18:23 CDT
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please hurry with the next chapter
| Reviewed By: Chaos Owl (Too lazy to log on...) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 16:40 CDT
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Oh... Tayson HATES anything girly girly. She chases with her hammer or kendo stick when she is angrey.
| Reviewed By: Chaos Owl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 16:15 CDT
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THANK YOU FOR CHOOSEING ME OH MIGHTY ONE!! *bows before Oceano_Azul 10000 times* I worship you forever now! Ohh...please can you make Tyson suprise when he sees her bit beast? Hehehe... Oh just remember she's a pig!! *gives you your favoirt plushie*
| Reviewed By: Danzku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh! I liked it alot! You're a grate writer ^.^! Thanks for putting my character in your fic. I hope you update soon ^___^! OH! And before I forget! *Hands you a Tala plushie.* There you go! ^^ Thanks again! Ja Ne!
| Title: Thank you!!!!!!
Reviewed By: KuroMirai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for using my oc the chapter was great up-date as sooooooooooonnn as you can plz ^_^
| Reviewed By: Ice Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 05:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.M.G, I'm so happy you picked my Oc and this opening chapter was great! You got mimi just right, like she was your own OC! Update soon!
| Reviewed By: Xacani [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 20:07 CDT
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This is a very good start. Keep up the good work!
| Title: Thankies!
Reviewed By: dreamlessnights(sorry too lazy to sign in -_-) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for choosing my o/c. a really really great author! Try and update when you can! ^^
| Reviewed By: kuro_mirai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 20:52 CDT
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(Name:) Sei Takaken (Age:) 18 (Color of hair & eyes:) Dark purple hair up in a high ponytail tied up with a red ribbon with Light purple eyes (Personality:) never serious unless in a beybattle then she is overly serious, loves making fun of people. Has a vary bad temper, and she is not afraid to punch. (Clothes:) dark blue shirt reads, "stop living in the past" with ripped up worn out jeans, black bandanna on her head. (Likes:) pulling pranks, running, spying on people, traning, and making people mad. (Dislikes:) preppy people, people who underestimate her, sitting around. Paired with: Kai or Robert and Max (don't really care) (Bit-Beast:)Zara thunder cheetah (Color of the Beyblade:) dark yellow and black (Attacks Defenses:) thunder claw, rebound thunder strike and magnum defense. (Other:) and Hates pink she'll brun anything that is pink well thats it if i dont make it in thats ok no hard feelings ^_^
| Reviewed By: Chaos Owl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 19:29 CDT
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Name & Surname: Tayson Genko Nickname: Drag, Tay, Dragon Master, Dragon Empresses Age: the characters will be 18 (just to let you know)18 Colour of hair & eyes: Hair: sky blue Personality: Hot headed (only when angry or some one call her a cow.), kind, generous, all those traits of a heart of gold. Clothes: Red sleevles tank top with red, blue jeans and with banndana(sp) Likes: Food, bey bladding, dragons, Deslikes: Cold hearted people, being called girly, people underestemate her, diets, losing Paired with: Tyson Bit-Beast: Ancient Dragoon (chiness rainbow dragon with siliver wings, gold eyes, broze horns, copper colored spikes and claws Colour of the Beyblade: Navy blue and ruby red ( blade edges is tipped with dimmond. Attacks moves: Elemental Storm attack, Omega Elemental attack, Hyper elemental attack, Fire fist, Ice kick, Storn tail, Earthquake stomp, Electric Slash, (Final attack) Omega Elemental Hyper Victory Tornado Defenses: Thunder wall, Storm wall, Fire wall,Ice wall, Elemental Foctuse Other: She is unkwnow starts. She is famous though. No data is collected about her blade, bit beast, attacksor anything, though her data about her titles about her and her personal infermation is availble.
| Reviewed By: Cord [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 17:46 CDT
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Name: Tawny Au Delà De Age: 15 Color of hair & eyes: Short black hair with a few red highlights that are usually in pig tails and lilac eyes. Personality: A hyper-active, stubborn, short tempered, competitive, and loyal person. Need I say more? Clothes: A purple shirt under a blue and white striped sweater(ones with pockets on the front and a hoodie) and blue bell bottom jeans. Likes: Anything sweet, beyblade, art, fighting, and being with her friends. Deslikes: Pink, being alone, boredom, and Mariah. Paired with: I wouldn't care who she goes with. Bit-Beast: Alexsander, a green and white dragoon. Colour of the Beyblade: White with a pale green attack ring. Attacks&Defenses: Holy Judgement(attack),Saint Cross(attack), Divine Aegis(defense), and Pure Guard(defense) Other: Tawny is french and her mom and brother died in a car crash. Her launcher is a big cross. Anyways, you don't have to use her. Who ever you choose is fine by me. Good luck!
| Reviewed By: Xacani [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...I forgot Neo's age. It's 16, but she's pretty tall for her age. Sorry if I didn't add it in earlier.
| Title: Please pick me! and I'll give you cookies!
Reviewed By: Ice Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 04:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz let me be in this! Name: Mimi Winsor Nickname: Angel Age: 18 Colour hair: Strawberry pink, mid-length two bang's curl inwards to frame face. Colour eyes: Sapphire blue, that sparkle when really happy. Personality: Vain and very stubborn but is very caring of friends, a little over protective of them. She is normally very happy and always looking on the bright side unless she lose's her temper, which is very short. She's one to forgive and forget and is very out spoken, which can sometimes lead to trouble! Clothes: 3/4 white sleeveless top, tight black hipster trouser's, silver hoops, silver croos on long chain, crystal belly bar. Likes: Singing, shopping, chatting, flirting and pink. Hates: being ignored or upstaged, school, not getting her own way, fighting and Mariah. Paired with: Any one, don't really mind. But would prefere Kai! ^__^ Bitbeast: Serenity- A angel with white wings, white clothes, long blond hair, a silver war helmet and a gold staff. Blade: White and gold. Attacks: Angel Arrow and Light Slash- Attack. Destiny Shild- Defense. Other: Mimi is a former cheerleader and loves her credit card's!
| Reviewed By: Xacani [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Neo Strife Hair: shoulder-length, sky blue with pink streaks Eyes: dark magenta Personality: ice cold, silent but deady, so calm it's scary, poker-face, straight to the point; gradually shows care and loyalty Clothes: tight blood red shirt with big black star in the middle, midriff area cut off; small white vest, loose jean capris, brown boots and fingerless gloves Likes: music, art, being by herself, practicing her fighting skills, singing Dislikes: people butting into her business and personal space Paired with: ...Any of the four guys is fine with me. Bit-Beast: Diablos, a black and red devil with large wings and eery yellow eyes Color: black with silver linings and four devil wings on the attack ring Attacks+Defenses: Crazy Claw (keeps crashing into opponent), Beserker Fury (won't stop 'til opponent's defeated, uses Neo's energy), Dark Messenger (Beyblade is wrapped in dark energy and destroys opponent, 59% chance of destroying Neo herself, last resort only); Black Barrier (dark barrier surrounds Beyblade, only useful against weak attacks) Other: Neo has a special bond with Diablos; whenever he is hurt, she is hurt. She also has a purple star under her right eye. Well, that takes care of that. Have fun choosing and writing the story!
| Title: Next....^^
Reviewed By: dreamlessnights [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bit-Beast: Fiery is an yellowish-orange horse with fames on it's mane and feet with white angelic wings that has flames surrounding it. It's tail also has a flame at the end. Colour of the Beyblade: Black with red lightning streaks and a fierce attack ring that can break a blade if it hits the blade hard enough. It also has very sharp metal edges that at a mere touch can leave a cut. Attacks&Defences: Fire spin: Fiery shoots super hot flames out of her mouth. These flames are so hot they melt everything in her path, even rocks. Agility: Fiery moves extremely quikly using it's hooves and speed to dodge from the opponent. Dive Bomb: Fiery swoops down on her opponent and can blaze it to cinders.(It can fly because it has wings)Other: She's the biggest klutz you could imagine.Cats (As weird as this sounds, she's terrified of cat. she'll refuse to be in a room with a cat), water (She can't swim) Also deathly afraid of heights. well that's a;ll! update! ^^
| Title: Next! ^^
Reviewed By: dreamlessnights [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
she's funny and friendly but to her enemies she's dark and somewhat annoying. To her, friends are a rare thing to come by, but when you find a good one, keep it for life. While Xylia occasionally determines a man attractive, she has never been involved with one. She finds most males, "Cute, but stupid". She may be hard to get to know at first, and brush people off, but just have a little patience, and she'll come around. Emotions are a struggle for her. Especially love. she's very forgetful, sometimes lazy, easily scared (but she forgets about even that sometimes), very clingy with she trust's someone, she can take care of her self when she's alone but easily become dependent when she's around other people. Clothes: Usually wears a red badanna, a red T-shirt with the phrase "Catch me..." in the front and "If you can..." on the back. She also wears baggy blue jeans, faded blue shoes and a gold heart shaped locket with a picture of her mom and dad in it. Her skin is a pale tan color so that one cannot say if she's had too little sun or too much. Likes:Sugar, reading, writing, music, and animals.Dislikes:Peopel that make fun of her likes or anything, and annoying people. Paired With: KAI! PWETTY PWETTY PWEASE! If not for any reason them MICHAEL! If not THEN LEE! BUT I REALLY REALLY WNAT KAI PWEASE! Continue in next review... .
| Title: I Hope You Choose Me! ^^
Reviewed By: dreamlessnights [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you choose me . ^^ I guess everyone hopes so lol. Name & Surname: Xylia Shiteru. Nickname: Lia. Age: 17. Colour of hair & eyes: Waist length black hair, as black as a night's sky in the winter. Usually wears a red badanna that seperates the bangs from her hair. Clear, crystalline, cold and intense violet eyes that have flecks of crystal blue throughout. Occasionally glows silver and turns a dark purple when angry. The kind of eyes that once you stare into them, it's difficult to look away. They also seem to hypnotize people in a way. o_0 Personality: A fiery temper and quick to anger she takes no insult lightly. Most underestimate her but come to be surprised by her abilities. She loves to take risks, the more dangerous the better. She is the sly, sneaky, somewhat nosy type, always getting into people's business as well as trouble. She has an undying thirst for adventure and travel, never staying in the same place for long. She loves to annoy fellow travelers and can be quite the mischievous one at times. She has way too much curiosity as well as aggression. She never trusts those she just met and is constantly suspicious of strangers. She will go berserk if she doesn't eat for long periods and will seem to have gone mad, developing an even worse temper and twice the aggression.Her personality has many twists and turns, making her nearly impossible to figure out. Once you think you know her she reveals something else you had no clue she had. Continue in next re | Reviewed By: Danzku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Name: Nicole Hawk Nickname: Niko Age: 17 Colour of hair/eyes: Her hair is Long, curly-red that reaches her hips(Keeps it in a high pony-tail) and her eyes are icy-blue. Personality: Anti-social and quiet, but speaks up when needed. She may seem like the type to bite your head-off but really has a heart of gold... you just need to get to know her better. Clothes: Silver tank-top & Blue baggy-pants. Also Wears red fingerless cloves & black army-boots. Likes: Winning, Beyblading, Music(Mostly Rock & Metal but anything ells will also do...), singing & telling people off. Dislikes: Preps, Pink & Loosing. Paired with: Kai(If not then... uuh... I like all 4 so.. doesn't really matter.). Bit-Beast: Mangetsu(A silver fox with a moon on his forehead.) Colour of Beyblade: Silver with a black attack ring. Attacks&Defences: Moon-beam(Attack), Shooting star(Attack), Star dust(Ofence[sp?]) Star-stap(Defence), Moon-light dance(Defence) Other: Always wears a silver ring on her left little-finger and a silver locket in the shape of the moon. There you go. I hope you pick me but if you don't, it's really fine with me ^^. This sounds REALLY good so update soon and good luck with the fic! JA NE!
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