| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: inspire_me On: February 21, 2005 21:00 CST
Comment/Review:
That was so awesum!! You definitely hab skill Why isn't anyone reviewing!?!?!! >:( I really love your story ad i hope you'll write more.
|
Reviewed By: me_and_you_o12 (not logged in) On: November 25, 2004 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG....your fic is coooool, and yet you dont have any reviews! *glares at readers who didnt review* well....your talented! Kenshin was totally ooc, but it fits this setting, and time of fic ^^; you.totally.ROCK!
|
Title: WHAT?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Meh ( Keyiotuo ) On: November 23, 2004 01:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keyiotuo my name. ( pronounced:Kyoto ) I'M THE FIRST TO WRITE A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO WAY!!!!!!!!! HAVE PEOPLE BEENREADING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!that was.. can't say it. too shocked & all these other feelings........ different setting.. never read a fanfic of RK that was in our time. BUT IT WAS NO WORDS CAN DISCRIBE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOTS OF DRAMA I'M NOT REALLY A DRAMA FAN BUT- here I'll stop the caps.. for now... well drama was the key feeling for this type of story. Most of the characters personallity's was twisted but then again so was the setting. It's in our time & our generation is twisted like that so can't really chew you out for that. I saw this was your only RK. You should write more it's thanksgiving break.. heh. oh yeah what color are the uniforms?.. They ( in my opinion ) look really cool navy blue.. KENSHIN LOOKS KICK ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE WHOLE HAT BACKWARDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE LOOKS REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok I think that's it for this morning yes it's 1:46 AM in my time. But I had to finish the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! well too bad it ended!!!!!!!!!1 the was a cliffy even if it was a happy ending!!!!!!!!!!!! If you could write another similar too that( settings & character wide ). ok this is the longest I have writen a review. ok.. I'm stopping.. for good.. JA NE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEYIOTUO ( YAY! ) PEOPLE THAT IS MINE LITTLE THING THE |
