| "Yukina's letter" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 23:13 CDT
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You're gonna make me review once for every review you left me, aren't you?
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 19:39 CDT
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Write sequel or or second chapter...... now....... Now i've completed my promise of reviewing your fics.....
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 19:35 CST
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WRITE. SEQUEL. NOW.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 20:44 CDT
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you know what? i just realize you have a lot of spelling and grammar errors ^_^.
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Title: Hiei's sword isn't a katana :p
Reviewed By: Neko Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a few complaints, but don't worry, it gets better. First of all I thought Hiei was a little out of character when talking alone with Yusuke. Despite what the fandom around Hiei says, he isn't arrogant; he's realistic and extremely strong. He's not stupid enough to threaten Yusuke (Hiei is A class, Yusuke S Class). Secondly, the katana thing; it is a one sided sword, but it isn't curved (at least, not as much as a katana is). There were grammar mistakes here and there, and I'm not too fond of the abruptness of how you dealt with flashbacks. But my last complaint is mixed in with a complement. The subject of Hiei and Yukina is a favorite of mine, and you jumped right into the middle of a story with so much potential. I guess that is a thing of preference, but I would like to see the whole story unfold from the moment it starts to when in finishes. =^-^= Be glad, this story has fans and I would be interested in an update as well. This could turn out to be a very good story.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 19:31 CST
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>.< grrr...when're you gonna update?!?!?! *folds arms and pouts* you promised!!! i gotta read the next part!!! hiei-*pops up and knocks her out* just take your time, i really don't want to have to read my suicide attempt anyway... sam-X.X
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Reviewed By: J On: October 26, 2004 17:38 CDT
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I enjoyed your story and if you can please wright a sequel.
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Reviewed By: Your_master_is_my_dog [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiyas!!! Wow,I love your story!!! I haven't seen very many stories about Yukina finding out, and if I have, they weren't like this!! This is awesomeness!! ^^ Keep it up, and keep writing!! Add my Hiei-chan!! Pwease? Regarding the little "where did it come from" contest in my story Beauty and the Egotistical Beast... YOU'RE CORRECT!!! As your prize, I'll add you or a character of yours in as a cast member in the sequel. All I need is the description. That a good enough prize for yas? Yes? Possibly? Maybe? Hmm? Well, either send your answer in a review, or email me! Hope to hear from ya soon and read more of your works! ~Your_Master_Is_My_Dog~
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this is awesome. write the hiei one soon okay?
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