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"Don't Mess with me" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ]
 Title: Its me! Kanna!!
Reviewed By: chibikitty [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 09, 2004 17:19 CDT
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Hey Mae, It may only be the first chapter but its great!! Update soon kk?
 Title: Email: Nekoyasha2003@hotmail.com just in case you need more information
Reviewed By: The Youkai Nightmare [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 08, 2004 15:32 CDT
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My character name is Tessa Suzama and she has long, reddish-brown hair down to her mid-back and brown eyes that will get lighter or darker depending on her mood (the lighter they are the happier). She generally likes to wear a pair of black slacks and a tight black tank-top with a zip-up hoodie. Tessa is generally outgoing and loves to tease people. If she gets to know somebody and likes them she gets protective. If she gets mad she likes to shout at the person or object that gets her angry. She can get very sugar high from sweet snow but salsa also gives the same effect for some odd reason. She's a hanyou, half-human half wolf demon ans she has grey wolf ears and tail along with claw-like nails. (she likes Hiei...but I guess that's optional). She always has a katana with her and is very protective of it. She has a soft spot for little kids and innocent-natured people (ex: Yukina). In height she's an inch shorter than Hiei. Tessa also happens to be a very skilled pick-pocket. She is also a very good drawer and likes to write poems. When there is a battle, she's itching to fight and she's actually an ok fighter, but not the best. She has no family (that she knows of)but has a tendency to get depressed whenever someone asks her about it. She also has a low tolerance for idiots. For a past she's always been alone and so that's how she got to learn how to pick-pocket so well. Please put my OC in... I'll still read your fiction even if you don't though. ^o~
 Reviewed By: Raycine  On: August 02, 2004 22:05 CDT
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Name:Jameka.Age:16Hieght:5'1.Wieght:90Race:Forbidden child(fire/water).Form:dark crimson hair that has pitch black on the top of her head that goes to her ankles.Eyes:silver thats rimmed with blue.Personality:quiet,shy,one firey temper that can even scare away the most evil person in the world,but once you get to know her shes sweet,Kind.and gets ticked off when somebody mokes her.PJ's:black boxers w/red top and red boxers w/black top.Regular: any kind of dark color baggy pants and any kind of dark color tank top also a sleeveless black trench coat with fingerless gloves (doesn't matter what color they are) and some black sneakers.other:likes to sing,play her guitar,dance also likes any kind of music and loves to read.Life:she lives with her big cousin Ashley(who is also a forbidden child(fire/ice)
 Reviewed By: Raycine  On: August 02, 2004 22:05 CDT
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Name:Jameka.Age:16Hieght:5'1.Wieght:90Race:Forbidden child(fire/water).Form:dark crimson hair that has pitch black on the top of her head that goes to her ankles.Eyes:silver thats rimmed with blue.Personality:quiet,shy,one firey temper that can even scare away the most evil person in the world,but once you get to know her shes sweet,Kind.and gets ticked off when somebody mokes her.PJ's:black boxers w/red top and red boxers w/black top.Regular: any kind of dark color baggy pants and any kind of dark color tank top also a sleeveless black trench coat with fingerless gloves (doesn't matter what color they are) and some black sneakers.other:likes to sing,play her guitar,dance also likes any kind of music and loves to read.Life:she lives with her big cousin Ashley(who is also a forbidden child(fire/ice)
 Reviewed By: Psychopathic Pyromaniac [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2004 15:16 CDT
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Name:Roxie [AKA Infinity] Age:19 Height:5'8" Looks:Chin length silver/white hair that spikes at the tips. Egyptian tan. Dark purple/mahogany eyes Acts:Is the silent mysterious type. She believes in certain superstitians. Loves the dark and quiet. Is also fond of the cold. Is not easily angered, but when she is, she's dangerous. Race: Devil/Angel Outfit:Black cargo pants with short sleeve red baggy shirt and knee high black boots.
 Title: Part 2
Reviewed By: Bishie Stealer [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 01, 2004 19:49 CDT
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Hobbies: Singing, drawing, agitating people, being weird and random, watching scary movies, writing scary stories, stalking people, hugging random cute and/or sexy bishounen, getting blackmail on people, getting people drunk, eating candy, riding her motorcycle, playing her guitar.
 Title: Can I Join?
Reviewed By: Bishie Stealer [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 01, 2004 19:46 CDT
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Name:Ria Takara Height:5'9 Age:17 Looks:Waist length brown hair w/ shoulder length red bangs. Rich tan complexion. Silver eyes mixed with green. Acts:Is usually hyperactive. Enjoys acting weird to confuse and agitate people. Is a sadist and schizoid. Enjoys violence and bloodshed. Race:Shadow/Fire/Cat Demon Clothes:Black bondage pants with black combat boots and a longsleeve black shirt that has in bold 'Maybe I should poke you in the eye with a really hot french fry'.
 Title: continuation
Reviewed By: Eriko (beautiful sin)  On: August 01, 2004 17:29 CDT
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What she usually wears: blue jeans tight on the top but loose on the bottom, with a blue skirt with white flowers up to her knees on top of the jeans, black tanktop, she has a tatoo on her shoulder a small tatoo of a rose, an anklet with dolphins, she doesn't carry a purse but sometimes she as a black hat, sometimes she even wears a silver tie Likes: red, candy, water, guys with black or red hair, writing, singing (but is very shy),music, and football (soccer) Dislikes: purple, sour things, spiders (I personally think they are cool)airplanes (-_- I get plane sick, studying (her grades aren't to good) Life: she lives with her father and mother, but they are almost always busy and she has a little brother, he's 11 years old and looks like a lot like his sister, she's never had a boyfriend before because she's very shy but still pretty Well I hope you liked my characters I hope you pick one
 Reviewed By: Eriko  On: August 01, 2004 17:19 CDT
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I'll give you a boy and a girl The boy: Name: Kioshi Asakawa Nickname: Oshi Hair: choppy black hair a little past his shoulders Eyes: Honey color Age: 17 Height: 5 feet 8 inches Weight: 110 Personality: quiet and mysterious but once you get to know him he is very nice, but very ruthless towards the people he does not like What He Usually wears: baggy green pants, white shirt with longsleeves and a black shirt on top. Most of the times he has a big black back with him the bag says "Misunderstood" on it in white letters. He has a two necklaces on his neck, one is a dragon and the other looks more like a white string and sometimes he wears sunglasses, he looks a little rugged sometimes with his baggy clothes but he's very handsome. Likes: drawing, rollerblading, computers, reading, silver, to study Dislikes: doesn't like when people try to get him to talk, preps, chocolate (don't ask), yellow Life: he lives with his mother, he doesn't know much about his father after his parents got divorced and he is very studious, but he's not extremely smart he's just a little above average Girl Character Name: Sakura Mino Nickname: Kura Hair: wavy brown hair up to waist Eyes: greenish brown Age: 15 Height: 5 feet 3 inches Weight: 101 Personality: nice, sweet and sometimes a little over hyper, but when in a serious situation she knows what to do, she's hard to get angry but when she does she become unusually quiet I'll continue in a different review

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