| "Mother's Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: 0.0
Reviewed By: Encana On: August 03, 2004 15:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! That was so sad! Please add on to this story you have such a good starter going! I hope you write more REALLY SOON!
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Title: sad
Reviewed By: inu yashas witch [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is sad very good but still very sad please update
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Reviewed By: Nikkicross87 On: August 03, 2004 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really liked this story! I'm really interested to see where it will all lead to. Please keep writing. Could you make the chapters a bit longer though? I gave the Style a 7 because you did a rather good job of expressing Kagome and Inu-Yasha's sorrow. I gave the O/C a 5 because (so far) things have gone a lot like one would expect them to go if something like this really happened. Plus the loss of family or group is not new, but still good. If you write the whole story I will come back with another review and give a more accurate rating for the O/C. I gave the Enjoyment a 10 because I really liked to see how Inu-Yasha would react in such a situation. Inu-Yasha and Kagome's new bond from loosing their mothers (and fathers) is sad but it gives an even bigger sense of togetherness between them. (Or so I feel)I really liked that. This is something! I have NEVER given a perfect 10 before! :) I gave the Overall a 9 because overall I think it deserves a 9. (So far) Keep up the great work! Nikkic87 :) Now you can do the same kindness for me and review my story "The Music Box". It can be found in the Inu-Yasha section. Thanks!
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