| "Captured Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: ^-^ Super Kawaii
Reviewed By: Kitsune_Taijiya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
* blink * .. I think its good but you should put these thing's " " , ' ' etc . so I won't get confused .. or anybody else , BUT ! other than that , I THINK THIS STORY IS GGOD !!11!!! UPDATE SOON !!!^-^
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 04:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update ASAP!!! I love your story!! Please I bed of you!! UPdate soon!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why are u goin to end it like when it was getting good how mean!! Well you better update as soon as u get this review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 19:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love it!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashasdongseng [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 18:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it!!!! MAKE A NEW CHAPTER!!!! ^.^ !!!
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 22:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a great fic plz update and i have a few questions first i was wonderin what happened to inu and co...second why koenma is so scared and i think the spelling is off but nobody's perfect plz update soon great job on this fic
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Reviewed By: shikyo otome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 22:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
pwease continue. so why is koenma so scaired is what i want to know
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Reviewed By: Peril879 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 15:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
No offense but would it kill ya' to use these like,"You must be the new student." said the teacher. It was hard to understand but what I DID understand was good so update soon ok? OK. bYE!
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Reviewed By: Kappa-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 00:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you need to work on your spelling a little more, but other then that, great job!
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Reviewed By: K005 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey um when somebody is saying something you put them in these "" like this "Bye" Kagome said as she began her climb up the mountain of steps that led to her shrine/home and thoughts go in these '' like this 'God these stairs go on forever' Kuwabara thought as he continued climbing his way up to Gekais You should also work on your spelling u.u everybody would know that tjis is your first fic (is it your first fic?) anyways i liked it please update
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 13:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have to admit that was a little confusing, but it was still really good!! update soon!!!^__~
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