| "InuMatrix" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: curly211
Reviewed By: curly On: July 08, 2005 14:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I know I said I would read your stuff a long time ago but yeah I was doing stuff. That was really funny I was cracking up and my bro was getting pissed at me. Anywho I listened to you and made my one story more descriptive and now it sounds much better and I'm working on a sequel. Write more though.
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Reviewed By: I don't feel like logging in..... but its Andreahtreole... again.... On: October 17, 2004 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ *is scared* this is funny... Crim: You're an idiot. o.o; Crim, I'm not an idiot... Crim: Yes you are... *flames appear behind her and she suddenly looms over Crim by 300 hundred feet* YOU DARE DEFY ME?! Crim: No master... I'm just your faithful dragon... Don't call me master... Crim: .___.;
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 06:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! This is great! I love it, it's hilarious! I needed something to brighten up my day, it's WAAAAAAAAAAAY too early in the morning for me right now....and I'm wroking to get sum money in b4 school starts....ANYWAYZ, enough about my life, update soon!
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Reviewed By: >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On: August 18, 2004 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL I loved it L-O-V-E-D-I-T I think Naraku Is a sore loser he thinks he can get anything like on the show.You should have Naraku Disguise himself an Manaleak and fire Sesshy but then the real Manaleak come and get Naraku :) :) :) LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: myanime [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really great parody! Just wondering, um how far are you going to go? I mean are you just going to do the first matrix or are you going to do all three of them and if you do please have it make more sense then those stupid movies. Keep writing!
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another enjoyable chapter! You've a knack for the over-the-top and slightly off-kilter humor (that I adore). Great job! Keep it up! Looking forward to another chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On: August 14, 2004 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved i bursted out in laufter I love how you used Aqua teen even if it is cancled next time put in Sailor Moon pounding Naraku where it hurts :0
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Title: HAHAHAHA
Reviewed By: Sueric(not logged in) On: August 14, 2004 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great.... LOL .... I really enjoy your story because it ALWAYS makes me laugh :) ! Keep it up!
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