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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job! I like the thing you did with Kikyo. update soon.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_lover_90 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE IT UPDATE SOON AS POSIBLE.
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Reviewed By: JBird7986 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 14:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just started here and this has quickly become one of my favorite stories. There are still readers here! Please continue!!!!
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Title: a beautiful death
Reviewed By: kyoharu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just think that your fanfic is great yours is the first one i've read and i just love it i've read many others but this is still the best one keep it going give them kids please
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 23:25 CDT
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very well done. i like it. the lemon was very tasteful, not pwp or something like that and had a good background to it. i look forward to miroku and sango's return to figure 'this' one out. LOL. very well done. i like how you added all the five years of sexual tension to the air to make things a little bit more hot. (so many fics are just like, oh...well...i never knew...) lol. great fic, keep it up!!! OH! and don't belittle yourself. this fic WAS great! there is no reason for you to think otherwise!
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Reviewed By: sheba949 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 16:21 CDT
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this is a great fic, but i have one problem with it. i take french and je t'adore does not mean 'i love you'; je t'aime means 'i love you' gomen, had to point that out, it is sort of like a petpeeve.
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Reviewed By: AlexisBaby1991 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story it awsome. i hope you continue it. it is on my favirotes list and so are you.
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Title: Good Stuff!
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really have to whack myself in the head for not checking this out sooner... What a great job showing us Kags' frustration after 5 years as well as what she almost left behind. I love how you've matured her, yet she still feels threatened by Kikyo! The whole finger licking thing is just too hot! Now I can't get that image out of my head!!! I'll definately have to check out your other work. Ciao! W.
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Title: holy mother........
Reviewed By: lost in my head On: November 07, 2004 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god. that rocked. shiz, i gotta go take a cold shower......keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: LadyMiaka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... That was awesome! I've been looking for a good Inu/Kag lemon to read, and all I was finding were these terribly written pieces of smut. You are really talented and I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of your work. Keep up the good work! This is going on my favorites list!
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Title: wowzers
Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*logged out* On: August 27, 2004 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:o..............that was soooooo goooooood! omgosh.............dude.......yea........ur gunna be on my favorites!! lol...just one thing, in the beginning kagome seemed to be a lil tempermetal...lol....yea...meow...but THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY... OR I'LL BITE YOU!!! heh heh :)
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 21:44 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: ktakn On: August 25, 2004 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ nice! it could have been more rough but its very good! ^^ i hope you continue it
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....................*open mothed staring at computer* 'WOW' just 'WOW' that just bout all the word's that i can say bout now so keep up the good work and update if ur continuing i hope this wasn't just a one-shot!
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Reviewed By: jammies2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 17:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool story I liked it. *fanning self* You did great keep writing
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