| "Awaited Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: You rock!
Reviewed By: stormraven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice premise, you did a great job with Naruto's leavetaking and return. Good intro of an OC. Will you be explaining in future chapters about Naruto's and Yumiko's adventures? When Naruto left, he was a genin; what rank is he, now? Hope to see more soon, ~Stormraven
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Title: review??
Reviewed By: Hen Na Ikimono [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 12:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
um... I love your style! Write some more!! XD Personaly the best bishie for me is Kakashi (uuuh XD), but I can deal with Naruto. Especialy when he getted a little more interesting. In maga and anime he just pisses me off XD I wanna read more!!
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Title: awaited destiny
Reviewed By: chibified kitsunes On: August 17, 2004 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool fic! i like it. hmph, sasuke is such an idiot. he'll do anything to get power, including marrying a girl he just met. hope he doesn't get her! hahha, great story, i like it.
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Title: Too awesome!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: rikku_fan On: August 15, 2004 02:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
too cool... update please!!!!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Canj5 On: August 10, 2004 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you continue the story. It's well written in my opinion and you had a very good idea to make a new bloodline. It was so great. I hope I get to see more of your chapters soon!
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