| "Sending Over The Edge" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: AKKI_garrasguy On: November 14, 2004 12:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good you should finish it
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Reviewed By: nightwish17 On: November 13, 2004 17:33 EST
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listen i won't play with dat number rating. i'll tell dis in words; YA SUCH A AWESOME WRITER AND YA STOPPED?! DAT'S THE STUPIDIEST THING I'VE EVER SEEN!!!!! do ya really hate us? why do ya tortuare us?? i say dis once dis story is really good. great writers always create great stories so why did ya stop? I BEG u start writing NOW!!!pweeetty pweetty pliiiiiiiiisssssss complete dis wonderfull fic and i'll luv ya back;)!!!!
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Reviewed By: MoonSanctum On: November 12, 2004 22:12 EST
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URG!!! You stopped! How could you!?! Bad fanfic author! BAD! *sniffle* Now I'm upset. Update soon or face my wrath.
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Reviewed By: Intempesta Nox On: November 12, 2004 19:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I've just recently seen Hellsing myself, and am slowly working my way through the manga, and I have to say, this fiction is marvelously written. The characters seem very in which is very difficult to achieve when writing fanfiction. You pull it off well, and the result is simply amazing. I can't wait to see where this plot goes, and wait eagerly for an update. Your story is very dark, angsty, and bloody, everyhing that is Hellsing. What more could a vamp fan want? I only hope to see an update soon, but understand all too well the problems that arise in life. Here's hoping your migraine eases up enough for you to get the next chapter of this saga out, especially since you left off on such a cliffhanger. I marvel at your talent, and urge you to keep writing! Intempesta Nox
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Reviewed By: dana15 On: November 10, 2004 18:29 EST
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why did you do dis?! why didn't ya update??!!!! you're so mean........ updateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupd ateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!preeeeeeeeeeety pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaassseeeeeeeeeeee...
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Reviewed By: Sailor Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 14:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Its so dark and twisted. I also like the gore, but then I love vampires. ^^;; Gomen but I didn't review the other chapters, I couldn't stop reading. This story is wonderful to read and the plot is fantastic. I love the fact that you kept Alucard as crazy and mysterious as he is and Seres as innocent as she is. So is Alucard really going to kill Seres for not drinking his blood? Or will Seres manage to escape from her Master? Feel better soon!
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Reviewed By: Naria On: November 08, 2004 22:57 EST
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WRITE WRITE WRITE you are such a good writer why dont you write
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Reviewed By: wolfe On: November 05, 2004 12:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG U!!!!!dis is COOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U GOTTA UPDATE!!!! SO START WRITNG!!!!!!!;* love ya guys!
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Title: pissed offf!
Reviewed By: carolyn On: November 02, 2004 19:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! DAMN IT! I NEED YOU TO UPDATE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE GOD THIS SUCKS! DONT LEAVE ME HANGING HERE! I KNOW YOU HAVENT RUN OUT OF IDEAS SO WHY WONT YOU UPDATE?!!! IM BEGGING YOU! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! UPDATTTTTTE!!! AHHHHHH!!!!
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Reviewed By: first_love [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 13:20 EST
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ok it has been a very long time what is going on?
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Reviewed By: alucard'sgril On: October 31, 2004 11:00 EST
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it's been over a month please finish it i know your probably busy but please hurry up!!!
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Reviewed By: first_love [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 07:46 EDT
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Ok it has been to long where is chp.14&15?
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Title: Darkest_Psyche@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Darkest Psyche On: October 20, 2004 19:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? I'm so very impressed with your writing! You write the darkness and madness of Alucard and the innocence and light of Seras with such skill and mastery that I am in complete awe. You Fanfiction projects a pure unadulterated sexual tension and growing-dare I say it?-Love? that I am constantly on the edge of my seat. I can see exactly where you're going with this one. Alucard is taking Seras to the edge of madness and sexual desire without giving anything of himself, but he begins to be drawn in. His own game is turning against him. I suspect the hunter will become the hunted at some stage if he lets Seras' darkness out. She may become more than he can handle. I just can't wait to see what happens when these two finally come together. It will be quite explosive, I can tell! Well, that's all I wanted to say other than I hope that your computer problems are resolved soon. I was very sorry to hear that you are having problems for yet a third time. Please keep us posted on the situation fanfiction.net as promised in your A/N and ignore the comments of the reviewers who didn't bother to read your notes about what to do if you didn't post for a while. Darkest Psyche
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Title: Ooooh! So quick!
Reviewed By: Silver Neko (Whom mediaminer won't allow to stay logged in . . .) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 16:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-.- And I wanted to add it to favorites this time too! *Cries* Is suu good! And I almost always only check the ones they notify me for. -.- Yay! I stay up forever last night reading the whole thing and then I get up and I get another chapter! ---- Poor author-sama for having a migraine, but I still hate cliff-hangers so write more soon? Paweese?
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Title: Wow. Just . . . wow.
Reviewed By: Silver Neko (2:30 AM, whaddaya -expect-?) On: October 20, 2004 03:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sadly I've never even read the series before -- a friend had and sent this one to me because he apparently was -- yeah. Guys. *Shrug* Anyway, I think you may have just sold me yet another series so thats . . . hell, a bunch of money. Oh well. ---- Well, for a series that I've never read/watched I really, really, really loved your fanfic! (Actually, for just about any fanfic? Story? Let's go with story.) ^.^ My only problem is that for the first ten or so chapters (Well gee, there's not that many more, is there) all Seras seemed to be able to complain about was that he's "mean." I see him once or thrice and I get the impression that he's a cruel fucking bastard and mean doesn't really begin to cover it. Ah well, that's me, and Seras is, from what I gathered, made that way in the Anime/Manga/whatever. ---- Seriously . . . "Mean"?! ---- Oh. Don't mind the nine. That's because I'm your good old spellchecker/grammatik. Nothing major though. *Waves* Byebye!
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