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Title: Nuuuuuuu! >_
Reviewed By: Rizzle2k06 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2011 08:37 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its doooooooooneee!D: *sadness*.I swear this fic made it hard for me to read other hellsing fanfics.It set the bar that high :D.Thank you for finishing it despite your health status.It must have been hard for you O.O. Now I'm off to read your sailor moon stories while I wait for the sequel(I haven't read any SM fics but I'll give it a shot this once :P) |
Reviewed By: Rizzle2k06 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2011 10:38 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesomeness! XD. Alucard is understandably pissed...poor Seras :(. I feel sorry for the soldiers.Not so much for Walter though.He shouldnt have jumped to conclusions...idiot.How did Walter know about the details of taking a Consort though? Anyway, as much as I hate to see this wind down until the follow up fic, I'm looking forward to the last chapter :) |
Title: cliffhanger of doom!!! DX
Reviewed By: Rizzle2k06 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2011 10:37 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh dear,Walter goofed big time :S. At the moment though I'd like to know what Alucard thinks of all this. His demon is going to get a beating when he wakes up :D. And poor Seras! Too bad she can't summon some clothes before her room gets invaded. |
Reviewed By: Rizzle2k06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2011 01:15 EST
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*bleh.html codes cut off my comment* anyway...Lol!Here I was wondering what would happen if she went and off she goes!Pity about the runes though. One thing did bother me however.If Walter and Integra were aware of the mental connection before the whole mess started, why did they honestly think the runes would mute that? I mean, he did make her after all, and since I'm assuming that Walter hasn't picked up on the whole phantom touching aspect of it, it really shouldn't be that big a shock to find that out.At most I'd expect him to be more worried about the effect its having on Seras than the fact that the connection isn't dampened. Anyway, another excellent chapter! You're clearly having fun with this :D (passes out in bed & dreams about new chapter...zzzZZZZZ) |
Title: Lol :D
Reviewed By: Rizzle2k06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2011 01:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was about to go to bed when I got the email about the new chapter...now its after 4 in the morning >_ |
Title: The suspense
Reviewed By: Blumarshins On: November 26, 2011 00:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The way you build up suspense is amazing, I can't wait for the next chapter. How long is Alucard supposed to be chained up for exactly? I can't wait for Integra's visit to Seras. Thanks for a brilliant chapter. |
Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Rizzle2k06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2011 13:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow....just wow. Ok first off, since the rule with the mate kidding thing was brought up I had been wondering if it would count if done on the mental scape, so I'm glad that question got answered.But now after reading 22 & 23 I keep wondering what would happen if Seras'demon actually went to Alucard while he's bound up. It probably won't happen but meh, that's what keeps popping in my head. Anyway, again, excellent chapters! Simply brilliant :D. I especially couldn't stop laughing out loud at the scene with Walter watching Seras becoming totally out of character while feeding. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Rizzle2k06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2011 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cliffhanger of doom! noooooo! DX.oh well, i thoroughly enjoyed the new chapters :). I'm now dying to know what exactly is going on in alucard's head & seras' other half had me wide eyed for that entire chapter in disbelief. |
Title: Welcome back indeed... O.O
Reviewed By: Rizzle2k06 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2011 12:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, glad to have you back & hopefully in better health. ^_^ I just read 15 to 18 & HOOOOOOOOOOLY SHIT THEY WERE AMAZING XD. I almost cried when Seras came to the realisation that Alucard wouldn't be her Mate, & for the other chapters...well I had to read them in segments....yeaaaaaaaah, too much delightful darkness to handle in one go really. I've always loved this story & I've come back to re read it several times over the years so I'm glad you're working on it again. Now waiting impatiently for the next chapter!!!! XD |
Reviewed By: Blumarshins On: October 23, 2011 01:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated!!! What a hot, sensual, exciting, sexy, dark, beautiful, erotic, tantalizing (I could go on)chapter. Your story is amazing and the characters are not oc at all which makes it even better. Alucard is drool... I love the way you write and your comment about a sequal sent me excited like a school girl. Thanks for answering my question. I have another one, Seras first boyfriend was called Derek at the start of the story but his name became Mike towards the later ones, typo? I can't for your next chapter, please update soon. I don't know if I can wait a week!!! Love your work :D |
Reviewed By: Blumarshins On: October 19, 2011 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I am so glad your are back. This was one of my favourite stories those many years ago and now re-reading it again, has resparked my love of the Hellsing fandom. However, I do have a question about a possible discrepency. In the first dream with a vampire lover Seras had a couple of chapters back, she was kissing the vampire who I am assuming was Alucard, the naughty vampire, clouding her thoughts, red eyes at the end a dead give away, but in your new chapters you have developed the cool new plot about a vampire only kissing their mate even in dreams. I just thought I'd bring it up. Again I am so glad you are back and can't wait for the next chapter. I was never a AlucardxSeras fan before this story. Love your work :D |
Reviewed By: Vala On: November 09, 2007 19:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Soooooo.....chapter 15 will be up in a couple of days huh? *checks calender* it's been almost a year now, missy, lol. I hope you will update soon ^^
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Title: Yay! You're Back to this!
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 07:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for this forever! Thanks so much for getting back to this, I was gonna give up and take it off my favs list fairly soon, and I would have missed this enticingly dark scene. Keep this up, nothing's better than reading a nice, dark sex scene in the middle of class.
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Title: Yes! Finally!
Reviewed By: sensei_musume [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 22:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Great Job! please finish! Seras and Alucard in this fic is off the charts. they really stay close to what the really characters act and are. love it!
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 13:21 EST
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I am very happy that you decided to pick this story back up. Alucard x Seras is pretty much the only pairings I follow in the Hellsing fandom (I'm not a big fan of Alucard x Integra--which most non-yaoi fanfics are dedicated to), so to find that you had starting to update again made me very excited. As always, you're writing is just wonderful. I do find Seras to be a bit annoying at times but at the same time I have to give you kudos because I do believe you are keeping her in character (she can be a very annoying/obnoxious character, after all). You aren't rushing things either and making her cave into something that she would not. I like that and it speaks highly of you as an author. Great job on this latest chapter as well as everything in your story. You may want to look for some continuity issues which exist between the gap of updates. I could have misread it but I don't think Seras and Alucard were on the bed in chapter 13 (it sounded like they were on top of the bed) but they were on the bed in chapter 14. However, that could have been my misreading things. Thanks for picking this back up and sharing it with us. I'm excited to read more.
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