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| "Family Ties" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: articuno13 On: March 05, 2007 14:09 CST
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this one's good but did you al ready start the seq? if so what'd ya call it?
| Reviewed By: Natsuru On: July 23, 2006 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry! I'm so incredibly sorry! Thes tory was just too good! I couldn't pause partway to write a review, augh I'm sorry. Apparently, I got so caught up that I was hanging onto every word and sitting upon the edge of my seat, literally! Your story is just that awesome and you're just that much of an incredible author! Congratulations on the completion of your fanfiction~
| Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 12:41 CDT
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whoo!!!! continue soon!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Haruka Hana On: March 17, 2005 06:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
konbanwa! I just had to leave a review. I don't normally read on mediaminer, but I was desperate for a good Quatre fic. I'm so happy I found yours. Now stay put, I tend to write long reviews (and longer stories ^_~) Interesting idea you had to bring forth an unknown empowered sister. It only makes sense that out of 30 children, more than 1 would be gifted. I'm thrilled with your use of the flashbacks. They aren't confusing at all and give greater depth to the mysterious past and unknown sister. Please keep writing. I know what a load writer's block can be, but if you need help shifting that concrete block, let me know. I really want to know where your story is leading to. You have way too many mysteries here to just let it fade away without conclusion. I want to know how Isis became an enchained thief, who her daughter is, who her lover was. I'm absolutely dying to see Quatre and his sister reunited. Plus the wonderful aspect of division among the pilots with Heero's unflagging sense of duty when it comes to accomplishing a mission. Dear God, the idea of him ruthlessly killing the blonde after helping to save him from the crumbling building. It was a wonderful images of the dichotmy of what he feels and what he would force himself to do if ordered to. Of course, the most important compliment is that you stirred my imagination. The wonderfully complex ideas are letting my mind run wild. Thanks for the great story!!! Look me up sometime on ffnet *HarukaHana@hotmail.com*
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