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Reviewed By: Arii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 06:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely fantastic! Well written and the storyline totally rocked. Off to read the sequel.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 20:56 CDT
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I loved that story It was so awesome!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 15:16 CST
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Okay... so maybe I did. What of it.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 15:08 CST
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Except that you Americans can't use chopsticks correctly, while the Japanese can use forks.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 15:07 CST
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I love Pocky! Especially vanilla and strawberry...
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 14:55 CST
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i said this already, but... SELF DENIAL. Inuyasha seriously cannot help himself. Either admit that you love her... or don't, and stick to your choice.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 14:52 CST
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self denial... *sigh*
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 14:25 CST
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heh... Inuyasha is a sadistic fool
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Reviewed By: kitsune-koinu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 22:39 CDT
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:)nice fic!!!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 09:33 CDT
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THIS STORY IS SO FREAKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! DUDE GREAT JOB!!!!!!!! YOU ROCK!!!!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 18:30 CST
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Quite good.......loved it........i really dunno what else to say so sry about that but i loved the story......Cheers............p.s- there aint nothing wrong with the book.....i LOVE THAT BOOK TO DEATH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Blood and Chocolate
Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 09:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved this fic. i red the book and InusDeamoness is wrong. I red the book it is simalar but it is diffrent. Vivian doesnt get her love, Kagome did. Also Adrian doest love vivian after she transforms, Kagome still loved Inuyasha. One more is Vivian is a girl Inuyasha is a guy. Ja ne loved the fic it is the best one I have read on this site. Can't wait for the sequel whens it comming out plz tell
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Title: Blood and Chocolate
Reviewed By: Wolf_666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice work on this fic. i loved reading it. this is a bit late but better that never:) still waiting for the sequel. gonna read it.
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Reviewed By: P.R.D.D. aka Samntha On: October 02, 2005 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome... again man im gunna be stuck readin all ur storys but i dont care cuzz i like em so ya Ja ne
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 19:42 CDT
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I know you removed my other review because I told you the truth but it doesn't matter. You copied that whole chapter from the book. I was told by a member of the adimistration staff to report you because what you've done could get the site sued by publishing companies.
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Title: perfection agian
Reviewed By: angel_tears_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 02:59 CDT
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beautifu. simply wonderful. it is insanely good applause and pats on the back for you.
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Reviewed By: angel_tears_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 02:32 CDT
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ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooh. ao dramatic the tention s rising and once again i must go to bed sigh. oh well there is always tomorrow.
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Title: Gomen^_^*
Reviewed By: Ellighteinmint On: May 20, 2005 18:34 CDT
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Oh, I'm sorry that I didn't put anything there, my message was deleted. But, I really liked your story. It was sarcastically funny, and the romance and drama had all tied up and into one. I think it was very clever to had written a metaphor about how the sweet chocolate was the good side of their relationship, and the blood and dangerous side was if their friends had found out. I haven't read the book, so I'm not so sure if it was as great as your fan fiction. I'd really like to read more from you in the future. Keep up the great work. Ja ne... oh yeah, I got confused if the letters were supposed to be capital or not, so here it goes...
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Title: It's a Review
Reviewed By: Ellighteinmint On: May 20, 2005 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Kumoritora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(blinks) YOU WROTE THIS!? dang... lol I need to pay attention to the authors of the stories i read.. ok just gotta say..this is one of the best werewolf stories i've read. Though to be truthful the only reason i noticed this is that it had the same name as one of my fav books (lol as you have mentioned in the story) but 2 thumbs up. Now I gotta go look for other stories to read of yours lol bye!
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Reviewed By: AmberEyed_WhiteWolf On: February 07, 2005 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the Fic. I have read the book Blood and Chocolate at least 10 times by now. I was always saddened about her getting rejected by the guy. You did an excellent job rewritting the book with a better ending for the main character! I loved it!! Always love to read a good wolf story that is not portraying them as killers and such.
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Reviewed By: Arienishi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I soooo love your fic. I read it when it was over at fanfiction.net. I went to read it again but it was,t there any more, but then i found out it was over here and i was like thank goodness it's not gone. I love your stories sooo much!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Unknown Fool [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story rocks. I love wolves and werewolves, but most people think of them as evil. Like alot of your storys, this had a great combo of fluff, romance, action, angst, drama, and alot of other things I can\'t list. And like alot of your stories, or even poems, My eyes got something in them at the end. And I want to ask you about \"Seeing is Deciving\", but secnce it\'s not posted on mm.org yet I\'ll ask you here. Naraku said he was after Inu-Yasha. Well, what about Sesshoumaru? He\'s from the same father, right? So why wouldn\'t Naraku go after him as well? When Kikyo was dating him she could have told him about Inu\'s siblings. And why didn\'t Kikyo tell Naraku about Inu-Yasha about being hald werewolf? Love all of your stories and I hope you keep writting!! ~*~Uknown Fool~*~ P.S. Sorry for any spelling errors.
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Title: Second Reading
Reviewed By: Fay-of-Faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ I've already read this on ff.net months ago, but I just read the book 'Blood and Chocolate' and it made me want to read this again! ::is pathetic:: Anywho, good luck in high school, I just started my Freshman year two and a half weeks ago...Its not so bad after you get used to it. Good luck moving all your stories to here, it'll take awhile [I just revised all of mine and moved them here not too long ago...] but after awhile, everyone will get used to it. And mm.org isn't too bad. I enjoy being able to write individual summaries for each chapter. And I'm rambling now...I'll stop...^^;;
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Title: he he
Reviewed By: inuyasha_maniac [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm, i gave you a 10 on your style of writing because, i think you did a pretty good job. i gave you an 8 on SPELLING not really grammar, mostly spelling becuase i found a few words that were spelled wrong. i really really really liked the story, i've been telling all of my friends to read it. it's one of the best stories i've ever read. and the overall rating is pretty much OBVIOUSLY 10 lol. keep writing, i think this on and it\'s sequel are your best yet.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Saki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 15:22 CDT
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This was really nice... even tho the beginning wasn't all that suspenseful (sp?!), I loved the end. And especially the Trial. You are definitely my most favourtie authoress of all time. -^_^- I cried during the trial... keep up the awesome work! (Staaaarduuuust~ ^_~)
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Title: Up to chap. 11...
Reviewed By: Kawaii Saki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 15:02 CDT
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So I'm one chapter earlier. But--! I just had to review. I can't believe Kikyo tried to attack Kagome. Humph. Kikyo no bakayarou. >___> *Whacks Kikyo with a frying pan and chucks a couple packages of raisins at her*. -___-;; Well, you have done a very good job of a cliffie. And now... the truth is about to be revealed!! *Toddles off to read... chappie 12*
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Saki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 14:56 CDT
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GO KAGS!!! Beat that slut!! xD Nyahahah!! Lol. Anyway... err... could Kagome be the moon goddess? ...What's up with the moon-shaped birthmark? Or is just... a birthmark? Hmm... *pounces on chapter 10 and starts reading*
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Saki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 14:35 CDT
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-^_^- My, my. Blood and chocolate, indeed. I have to admit, you can write lime pretty well. Bloody lime. Like... in Nightmare's Memories. Bloody lime... it's like... your trademark. Lol. Well, even though I didn't know previously what this chapter would have been, I think it's a fitting chappie to review, ne? ^_^;; Anyway, it's still wonderful so far, and I'm off to read chappie 7....
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Title: Up to chap. 3...
Reviewed By: Kawaii Saki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 14:17 CDT
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^_^ Well, it seems Inuyasha is slowly warming to Kag... I wanna get back to reading =P I'll review again at... chappie 6... ^_^;;
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