| "The Four Elements" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: sorry
Reviewed By: SesshomaruInuyashaKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 18:02 CST
Comment/Review:
i meant work!
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Title: great wprk
Reviewed By: SesshomaruInuyashaKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 18:02 CST
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i like it. keep up the good work. sorry that i can't give u any ideas. i was wondering could i be in it too? if not that's ok with me
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Reviewed By: Bloodstone a.k.a Chan On: January 15, 2005 15:12 CST
Comment/Review:
It's all good. I don't mind it at all. So update and whatever.
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Reviewed By: ..nef.. On: September 26, 2004 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok justin i so want to read more..cause its like FUN woot. adn youd bette rmake that hot guy call me or else man....
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Title: Need more reviews please
Reviewed By: Zero88 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 16:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
In order for me to continue the story, I want 15 reviews. Please!!!! Please, please, please!!! Review!!! Need some ideas for I am running out of them. ^_^'
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Reviewed By: Ice flame ( not logged in) On: September 09, 2004 11:49 CDT
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This is seriously a great fic! i'm sorry i didn't put ur characters inmy fic put i really wanted to get the first chappie up! any way just a incy complant HOW DARE YOU MAKE MY PIE-PIE (Pietro) GAY! *sniff* I love him and he loves me (in my own little world anyway) anyway other than that this is great, plz update soon
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Reviewed By: sTicH On: August 29, 2004 08:46 CDT
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-_-.... umm...i think i would have thrown you off the bed...and went back to sleep... the story was okie =d..cant wait to see the second chapter
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Reviewed By: ne On: August 25, 2004 11:49 CDT
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ahem ahem i agree with chandra....i so wouldnt sream and do nothing justinman. but i like it..-.-! write more or i shall be forcedto kil you...
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Reviewed By: britishgeorge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
a fight between the elements nd mystique
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Reviewed By: Chandra On: August 22, 2004 00:59 CDT
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All though I believe there are some places in this fic where I know I wouldn't act *coughs*the scream*cough*. It was ok. I wanna know what the hell the professor wanted. I wonder if I spelled that write. Oh who cares. Ciao for now.
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Reviewed By: Ice Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 09:05 CDT
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This is good so far, i like jean reading the girls mind, it was funny! update soon! Maybe you could send one of your character's in to my fic 'The new team in town', it'd be cool!
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Reviewed By: Grrr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 00:17 CDT
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hey, i like the story so far...update soon, i wanna see what happens ^__^
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