| "Snowflakes and Coughdrops: When a Sword Can't Protect Her" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 22:07 CDT
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i really like this fic. its very sweet. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your a great writer! can't wait for next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 20:42 CDT
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Hi there, this is an awesome story so far and I love your writing style! It's so cute and I love how you capture the conflicting emotions between Kagome and Inuyasha...I was just wondering, exactly what time frame is this in, is it back when they just met Sango, because Kagome's family doesn't even really know Inuyasha that well...update soon!
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Title: chapter 7
Reviewed By: inuchoyu (has not logged in yet) On: July 01, 2005 13:45 CDT
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update!
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Title: Snowflakes and Coughdrops
Reviewed By: Moon LaFleur On: March 16, 2005 02:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa Emptylocket! Update this fic soon Onegai. I can't wait to read more. Dewa Mata
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Reviewed By: emptylocket [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 20:06 CDT
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the last chapter was just inuyasha's nightmare. he gets all upset because in his dream kagome doesn't remember him
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Reviewed By: 1Inufan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 13:55 CDT
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cool please continue
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Reviewed By: Sarah hates Kikyo On: September 18, 2004 12:07 CDT
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I don't get the last chapter?
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Reviewed By: emptylocket [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 19:45 CDT
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hmm...i think i'm starting to figure this mediaminer thing out...but i still can't read some of the fanfics :(
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Reviewed By: kittyfire On: August 21, 2004 19:43 CDT
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I think its a cute story that has potential. However, it is lacking in the plot arena a little. I think you should add more factors into the story....but I guess that you were going to do that already:) Keep it up, I'd like to see where this story goes.
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Reviewed By: emptylocket [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 16:10 CDT
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hello everyone! i'm sorry to say that mediaminer hates me and i can't read the reviews people leave me. i've also put my story on fanfiction.net so if you can leave me a message there, that would be great! for the reviews that i can read, thank you so much for the encouragement! i hope that i can figure out how to get mediaminer to work for me. thankee!
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Reviewed By: 1Inufan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 14:37 CDT
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ooooo please write more! SOON! arigato! ja ne ni ima!
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Reviewed By: Truthseeker On: August 18, 2004 11:38 CDT
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Wonderful job setting up the idea and plot of your story. As someone already mentioned your description was excellent and beautifully done. You actually threw me in a little loop, which is always good for a writer to do! When Inuyasha came I expected to him to hear her coughing, see she was sick, take care of her, and they live happily ever after. Breaking away from the everyday fanfiction is what makes yours so great, keep your audiance waiting! Ipersonally adored the story and I hope you post another chapter soon....don't keep the audiance waiting too much!
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Reviewed By: Truthseeker On: August 18, 2004 11:38 CDT
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Wonderful job setting up the idea and plot of your story. As someone already mentioned your description was excellent and beautifully done. You actually threw me in a little loop, which is always good for a writer to do! When Inuyasha came I expected to him to hear her coughing, see she was sick, take care of her, and they live happily ever after. Breaking away from the everyday fanfiction is what makes yours so great, keep your audiance waiting! Ipersonally adored the story and I hope you post another chapter soon....don't keep the audiance waiting too much!
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Title: Please contiune soon
Reviewed By: Sailor_Linnea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! i thought this was a really good chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. I want to know what happens to poor Kagome! Is she going to freeze to death? Is she going to be really sick? Will Inuyasha come back and find her? Please, please, please, post more soon!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 13:20 CDT
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good so far. it's a good start! looking forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: InuShemeeko On: August 14, 2004 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story I can't wait to read the next chapter please continued.
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 01:52 CDT
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ooh Me like alot please continue I cant wait to see what happens next much huggles an smiles Mija..:-)
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Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 23:27 CDT
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You're very good with your descriptions of the surroundings. I could picture the snow and the cold so clearly! Lavender
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Reviewed By: inuchoyu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 22:33 CDT
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please continue. i'm anxious to know what happens next. Ja for now!
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