| "Signs Of Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: SeaRhapsody [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 05:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! I like it alot! I noticed that the status says complete, but it seems like it's not finished yet... Are you going to update any more? I think you should! ^_^
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Title: litldemoncatwwings
Reviewed By: litldemoncatwwings [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwww! that was so sad and her attitude towards the boys madde me soo angry! i wanted to hit her so hard when she insulted toboe for nothing at all! shes a bitch! her life story was sad and givin id be a bit upset about it too but that doesnt give her the right to act how she does to them! i can understand being mean back to tsume because he doesnt like her much but ///that bitch! oh well i liked the chapter and all i just got a bit upset. you really know how to get you rreaders emotions going, especially if theyve seen the shows. keep up the good work and have a very merry christmas!
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Title: litldemoncatwwings
Reviewed By: litldemoncatwwings [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i dont appreciate being talked about in the disclaimer...blah blah blah ya i did becauase it says you care. all i can truely say is ITS ABOUT TIME THE ROMANCE WAS TAKEN CARE OF!!! lol i really liked it and the goof up of howling really did remind me of the dude. glad she isnt trying to take me tsume thou. then i would really have to get angry. lol you had a really good style in writing the chappie and it made it go by supper fast. hope that the next chappie is just as interesting! lol know it will be love ya and have a great break!...oh cant come on new years because wont be back until the 2nd. hope it fun and i call you soon!
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 13:14 CST
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i think im on my user name if not im twilight!anyways! that was a pretty gewd chapter! cant wait for the next one!^___^update please!
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: go gurl.
Reviewed By: *can't log n*inu-sessfan On: December 04, 2004 09:31 CST
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u need to update........i'l read when i can cause i can't get on the computer like i use to
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 08:52 CST
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Aw that was so sweet! Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing style is sooo excellent!! This is one of the better WR fics I think. UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 16:44 CST
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wooh-weeh! its hot in here!lol kiba was-talk about!-in control!!lol update please!
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 16:43 CST
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wooooh-weeeh!!!its hot in here!^.^,lol!awww kiba was so...uhhhh...how could i describe...?oh yeah! talk about in control!o.O ^^please update!!!
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 14:21 CST
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Wow Kiba kissed her! Well I hope you update soon.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: inu-sessfan(don wanna sign on) On: November 28, 2004 11:17 CST
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that's a lotta waff waitin 4 the rest of the update
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Title: wow! finally!!
Reviewed By: lildemoncatwwings On: November 27, 2004 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really picking up! i read all ch. 4-7 in less than half an hour. i even told my mom to let me finish because i wasnt getting off hte comp till i was done and now its after midnight! i was really mad that you killed the doctor and that the coroner was really scary but i loved the humor that you threaded through it and the decriptions of the surroundings really transported me there. my only real complaint is that you need to reveal her secret soon and why her and kiba are always going around the fact that he has a thing for her, i think i'm gonna go crazy. i loved how you really portrayed the character's personalities closly to how they really are even towards the chick. it made it really believable. well hey gotta hit the hay but cant wait to read chapter 8! nite! oh and i hope you had a happy thanksgiving!
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 20:43 CST
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That was really, really good! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 20:31 CST
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oh!^^,that pin person was really me!^^guess i was on my sises screen name.sry! well anyways! that was such a wonderfull update!^^ it was so kawaii!! please update!!! PS:Kiba is HOT-:((@)):-
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