| "Signs Of Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Title: ^_^..............
Reviewed By: inu-sessfan....stupid computer..... On: November 23, 2004 11:56 CST
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ano....oro?!i'll b outta town 4 the rest of this week so i wont b able 2 give u a review......and my mom kicked me off the computer 4 a while so...yeah it hard anyway update i'll read when i get the chance
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 21:45 CST
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Cool chapter. I love this story. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: pin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 21:13 CST
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luv the update!!!! please oh please update!!! P.S.:kiba is hoOoOoOot!!!
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Reviewed By: Shay-Lyn On: November 09, 2004 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. This is really good.. Very nicely done.. You have a very direct style of writing but you still use alot of adjectives, You also have excellent grammar and spelling. Oh and the story/plot line, awesome.. first of it's kind I've evr seen. Also finally, you did a great job with characterization.... Thank you for the wonderful read... Shay
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Title: *cries*
Reviewed By: *cries*inu-sessfan..nani!i'm laz On: October 25, 2004 18:30 CDT
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so sad so sad u need 2 update before i cry a river...
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 16:05 CDT
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That was really sweet and sad. Please update soon.
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Title: .....nooooooooooo!!!
Reviewed By: lildemoncatwwings On: September 12, 2004 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really liked it...except for the fact that YOU HURT MY TSUME!!!!!!!! ok i feel a little better. i like your style of writing. even if i say your increadibly cruel for doing it, the suspence at the end of your stories always leaves me wanting to read more. you can create pictures in the mind all throughout the story and its almost like a movie in words. congrates. well, on to the next!
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Title: moody
Reviewed By: inu-sessfan(board)^_^ On: September 11, 2004 14:14 CDT
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is he moody or what
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Title: burning
Reviewed By: savvy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 20:55 CDT
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from writer to writer: YAY! GO KIBA, YOU SEXINESS, YOU
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Title: Ayume has fallen hard
Reviewed By: savvy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah, Ayume felt something there didnt she?
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Title: keep writing
Reviewed By: savvy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it but i have to be honest: it was a bit strieght forward and yet somewhat confusing, but i got the gist of it....keep writing.;)
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Title: Kiba is savvy's and you know it!
Reviewed By: savvy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Moose! you are awesome! on to the next chapter....
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Reviewed By: chihiro-san [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 18:16 CDT
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Reviewed By: Qveenie klu On: September 05, 2004 18:07 CDT
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YAYERS! i so happy and i don't know (or care) why!!! u sure this is Kiba/ayume? jeez, he's being very neutral about her. good grief. but then again, i have no idea who any of these characters are, so.... GOOD JOB!
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Reviewed By: Star Opal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really liking this story, and I can't wait to see more. You keep on going you lil 'writing machine'!
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