| "Signs Of Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] |
Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 16:44 CST
Comment/Review:
wooh-weeh! its hot in here!lol kiba was-talk about!-in control!!lol update please!
|
Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 16:43 CST
Comment/Review:
wooooh-weeeh!!!its hot in here!^.^,lol!awww kiba was so...uhhhh...how could i describe...?oh yeah! talk about in control!o.O ^^please update!!!
|
Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 14:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow Kiba kissed her! Well I hope you update soon.
|
Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: inu-sessfan(don wanna sign on) On: November 28, 2004 11:17 CST
Comment/Review:
that's a lotta waff waitin 4 the rest of the update
|
Title: wow! finally!!
Reviewed By: lildemoncatwwings On: November 27, 2004 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really picking up! i read all ch. 4-7 in less than half an hour. i even told my mom to let me finish because i wasnt getting off hte comp till i was done and now its after midnight! i was really mad that you killed the doctor and that the coroner was really scary but i loved the humor that you threaded through it and the decriptions of the surroundings really transported me there. my only real complaint is that you need to reveal her secret soon and why her and kiba are always going around the fact that he has a thing for her, i think i'm gonna go crazy. i loved how you really portrayed the character's personalities closly to how they really are even towards the chick. it made it really believable. well hey gotta hit the hay but cant wait to read chapter 8! nite! oh and i hope you had a happy thanksgiving!
|
Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
That was really, really good! Please update soon.
|
Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 20:31 CST
Comment/Review:
oh!^^,that pin person was really me!^^guess i was on my sises screen name.sry! well anyways! that was such a wonderfull update!^^ it was so kawaii!! please update!!! PS:Kiba is HOT-:((@)):-
|
Title: ^_^..............
Reviewed By: inu-sessfan....stupid computer..... On: November 23, 2004 11:56 CST
Comment/Review:
ano....oro?!i'll b outta town 4 the rest of this week so i wont b able 2 give u a review......and my mom kicked me off the computer 4 a while so...yeah it hard anyway update i'll read when i get the chance
|
Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 21:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool chapter. I love this story. I hope you update soon.
|
Reviewed By: pin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 21:13 CST
Comment/Review:
luv the update!!!! please oh please update!!! P.S.:kiba is hoOoOoOot!!!
|
Reviewed By: Shay-Lyn On: November 09, 2004 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. This is really good.. Very nicely done.. You have a very direct style of writing but you still use alot of adjectives, You also have excellent grammar and spelling. Oh and the story/plot line, awesome.. first of it's kind I've evr seen. Also finally, you did a great job with characterization.... Thank you for the wonderful read... Shay
|
Title: *cries*
Reviewed By: *cries*inu-sessfan..nani!i'm laz On: October 25, 2004 18:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
so sad so sad u need 2 update before i cry a river...
|
Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 16:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was really sweet and sad. Please update soon.
|
Title: .....nooooooooooo!!!
Reviewed By: lildemoncatwwings On: September 12, 2004 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really liked it...except for the fact that YOU HURT MY TSUME!!!!!!!! ok i feel a little better. i like your style of writing. even if i say your increadibly cruel for doing it, the suspence at the end of your stories always leaves me wanting to read more. you can create pictures in the mind all throughout the story and its almost like a movie in words. congrates. well, on to the next!
|
Title: moody
Reviewed By: inu-sessfan(board)^_^ On: September 11, 2004 14:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
is he moody or what
|
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] |
